I'm closer than you know. (On the spot)

[OveriseFan]

Written in like, 2 minutes right now. I hope you enjoy it. There's some real stuff I'm working on, but I don't want to post them til it's done, and hopefully you can have a recording or something too? Right now, I'm in the Fall Play at my school: An adaptation of Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli. It's awesome, seriously. So yeah, don't expect to see me all week, but if you have something you want looked at, PM me, and I'll get to it by next Sunday(Hopefully, unless I'm passed out.)

Enjoy. Godspeed.

I have watched the sky
Through windows
And cellophane
For so long
It seems to be fading

I have grown older
But I still don't
Understand
What it means to love
When you didn't have it planned.


I walk like an acrobat
Upon a tight rope
Of fortune
And every night I pray
That God won't let me fall, but he did.


And I have read stories
About girls from
Far away
I fall for them everytime
But then I find my head, again.


And wait.
And listen.
And learn.
Love.

[matt_rawlings]

I walk like an acrobat
Upon a tight rope
Of fortune
And every night I pray
That God won't let me fall, but he did.


And I have read stories
About girls from
Far away
I fall for them everytime
But then I find my head, again.




These two parts are great

[ArTkY_]

But then I find my head, again.

How will that flow in a song with the "again?"

And wait.
And listen.
And learn.
Love.

Love it.

teach me!

[OveriseFan]

But then I find my head, again.

How will that flow in a song with the "again?"

And wait.
And listen.
And learn.
Love.

Love it.

teach me!

It's almost like an after thought. It fits similarly to the stanza before it.

[OveriseFan]

but he did.

Is kinda like... I dunno. Said faster, louder.

And the same kind of with again.

[a speedo model]

I really like this alot. Great job with this James.

[black rose]

meh i liked it, but it wasn't your best.
i could tell your wrote it in a couple of minutes.
i'm really excited to see your new stuff that you've been working on.

good luck on the musical.

[OveriseFan]

good luck on the musical.

Haha, thank you. I'm going to need it.

[Slaytus]

greatt job with this. i didnt think it was yourbest either but its definatly good
mad props yo

[OveriseFan]

You all rule.

[Alex Djaferis]

yeah its alright. the acrobat part is nice. and the ending.

[ArTkY_]

It's almost like an after thought. It fits similarly to the stanza before it.
Ah ok.

And by teach me I meant teach me to write endings. hahaha

[black rose]

Haha, thank you. I'm going to need it. i'm sure you'll do fine. no worries :-)

[OveriseFan]

Ah ok.

And by teach me I meant teach me to write endings. hahaha

Rip off a monologue from your school play and make it apply to your song. :shrugs:

Haha, not really, but you could say that...

(I'll post the excerpt later for you to decide.)