roggie1590
11/10/06, 07:37 PM
i know this sucks, but i tried...
i dont like the ending, that done and gone drive me crazy. any suggestions??
Forever
"we can beat this" it was said
it rang in my ears, in my soul, in my head
as my perfect world, a child's world
was shattered, forever dead
the trust was there
the faith was strong
yet suddenly all that could be was wrong
as my hero, my idol, my own older blood
was finally spent, and finally done
she lay in the coffin clutching the beads
that she said would save her
as she got on her knees
but why put the effort? why waste the time?
many would put their whole life on the line
my courage, my faith, my belief was done
forever had failed me, forever was gone.
i dont like the ending, that done and gone drive me crazy. any suggestions??
Forever
"we can beat this" it was said
it rang in my ears, in my soul, in my head
as my perfect world, a child's world
was shattered, forever dead
the trust was there
the faith was strong
yet suddenly all that could be was wrong
as my hero, my idol, my own older blood
was finally spent, and finally done
she lay in the coffin clutching the beads
that she said would save her
as she got on her knees
but why put the effort? why waste the time?
many would put their whole life on the line
my courage, my faith, my belief was done
forever had failed me, forever was gone.