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lfdfforever
11/14/06, 08:56 PM
So I stumble through dictionaries
To find one word that could say everything at once
You know I'm trying and you know
I've found a depth deeper than than the core of your heart
This could be something to start on
Or just another thing to turn off
Work with it and hope the shapes puzzle fit
It won't ruin the taste
If you don't spoil the fresh food
Mix your mood in a see through pot
Spill the finished soup into a aged bowl
And drink the mistakes you've been living
I'm sorry I didn't stop you
I suppose I was afraid of a spinning problem
We consume the essence of the faultering spirit
Leaving everything we were behind in a unstable location
There's no need for short ends when we haven't even become
The beginning of the things we once trusted
I lie everytime I say trust
I blink everytime I see the old life
I remember the meaning and ask myself,"Why did you sing to the crows".
Did they have a answer I didn't?
Did they give you comfort when I couldn't?
wyverna
11/15/06, 08:43 AM
I love the first line;
So I stumble through dictionarys
To find one word that could say everything at once
Although isn't it dictionaries? Minor mistake, though, and I really like this overall :-)
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 09:23 AM
I love the first line;
So I stumble through dictionarys
To find one word that could say everything at once
Although isn't it dictionaries? Minor mistake, though, and I really like this overall :-) yeah it is lol, i forgot, thanks for enjoying it.
a speedo model
11/15/06, 09:26 AM
Dude, this really is great. All your recent works have been really, really great. Keep it up, man. I think you've really found yourself as a writer.
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 09:34 AM
Dude, this really is great. All your recent works have been really, really great. Keep it up, man. I think you've really found yourself as a writer. thanks, it's been really easy to write lately. I hope I can improve and stay steady.
a speedo model
11/15/06, 09:43 AM
thanks, it's been really easy to write lately. I hope I can improve and stay steady.
All your stuff has shown improvement lately, so just keep with it. I can see you putting music to this and making an album that will fucking rock.
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 09:51 AM
All your stuff has shown improvement lately, so just keep with it. I can see you putting music to this and making an album that will fucking rock. I plan to do that soon.
a speedo model
11/15/06, 09:54 AM
I plan to do that soon.
Sweet. Getting things recorded is always the problem with me, if I could get a microphone I could start getting things done....I need to pick one up this week and get this EP done.
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 09:58 AM
Sweet. Getting things recorded is always the problem with me, if I could get a microphone I could start getting things done....I need to pick one up this week and get this EP done. Do you have a band? Or do you write all the parts?
a speedo model
11/15/06, 12:10 PM
Do you have a band? Or do you write all the parts?
I write all the parts. Although, for some reason, I have no idea how to play/write for bass. So none of my songs have any bass..hahaha
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 12:19 PM
I write all the parts. Although, for some reason, I have no idea how to play/write for bass. So none of my songs have any bass..hahaha Bass isn't that cool anyways lol.
a speedo model
11/15/06, 12:21 PM
Bass isn't that cool anyways lol.
haha, yeah I've never been a fan of it.
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 12:25 PM
haha, yeah I've never been a fan of it. I play drums and guitar myself.
agloriousruin
11/15/06, 12:26 PM
Looks good, man! I really like the second part about the food. Excellent job!
lfdfforever
11/15/06, 12:33 PM
Looks good, man! I really like the second part about the food. Excellent job!Thanks for enjoying it.
a speedo model
11/15/06, 12:33 PM
I play drums and guitar myself.
I play guitar and a little piano. I also program the drums and all the odd little sequencing bits myself. I can play drums pretty well, I have great sense of rhythm, but I just don't have a set and they're hard to record. So I stick with programming them for now.
agloriousruin
11/15/06, 12:37 PM
Thanks for enjoying it.
Not a problem.
I play guitar and a little piano. I also program the drums and all the odd little sequencing bits myself. I can play drums pretty well, I have great sense of rhythm, but I just don't have a set and they're hard to record. So I stick with programming them for now.
I play guitar and I dabble with piano/synths. I have a drummer for this upcoming project with an acoustic set. Its proving challenging, but in the end it'll be worth it, I think. I still need a bass player, though. Anyone interested?
a speedo model
11/15/06, 12:40 PM
I play guitar and I dabble with piano/synths. I have a drummer for this upcoming project with an acoustic set. Its proving challenging, but in the end it'll be worth it, I think. I still need a bass player, though. Anyone interested?
Wish I could help, but as I said my bass skills are lacking.
agloriousruin
11/15/06, 12:45 PM
Wish I could help, but as I said my bass skills are lacking.
Haha. I can do it alright, but its not where my talents lie. I'll do it if its getting down to the wire, though.
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