it's short and simple but it's kinda cool

[ohreak gurl 08]

It rains tonight
Cuz you left without a sight
You left me out to dry
But instead all i could do was cry
You broke my heart in two
And for a brief moment i thought i hated you.

But then i looked back
Concluded that it was all whack
I figured you weren't worth my time
Because you committed the crime
You cought the soonest flight
And so it rains tonight.

[punk_rock_poet]

thats really fucking good! it doesnt matter if its short as long as it means something, keep writing ur really good