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[UTi]

A Letter To God

dear the man i praise and speak to every night
the angels can fall from the sky in fright
i ask you today why im here in this way
and why i have to stay here for another day

i pray my fears let it all go out in sorrow
hoping they will all be gone by 2morrow
i kno inside that my fears are what keep me living
and that one day i will understand what your giving

So i sit here today writing this letter
a letter to god hoping for the better
will i change will it fade away
make tomrorow my best day
thats what i need from you
thats what i want from you

my pen is shaking in my hand overwhelmed
the ink confused as my soul wishes to be calmed
i could rest here mourning or wait for something
i could wait here crying or stop living

whats your choice today my lord
should i draw my bloody sword?
its up to you how i will feel tomorrow
hate, pain , passion or sorrow

i scream your name today in vain
hoping that will somhow rid me of pain
ill cry until i drown in my own tears
crying until i find a place to hide my fears

so i now sit here writing this damn fucking letter
hoping and crying to make tomrowwo better
a letter to god as a cry for help in life
to end our everlasting bitter strife

So i sit here today writing this letter
a letter to god hoping for the better
will i change will it fade away
make tomrorow my best day
thats what i need from you
thats what i want from you

i want to get away
hide my self today
i went to leave this place
rid the world of my face

so im signing off saying goodbye
yours truly, i sign with a sigh
sincerely yours i scratch both out
yours truly....without a doubt

[Alex Djaferis]

i like it...purely from being able to relate.

[DriveTBSthru]

the title is so like umm.. simple plan or box car racer causer both bands made up a song bout that too.

[ohreak gurl 08]

ummm i don't think it's really lyrics ... it's more of a poem i think, but hey everyone has their own opinion ... but it is good

[Zack Attack]

very very cool song.

[DriveTBSthru]

yea.

[StudentRick08]

its really long..but its good. and yea it is like a poem but all songs are poems and all poems can be songs. good job:)

[wadejunkie]

i dont really prefer some of the wordings.

but i usually have a lot of problems with christian lyrics (but i am christian).

[Rufio217]

Originally posted by wadejunkie
i dont really prefer some of the wordings.



What does i mean to prefer some of something?


I am assuming you meant you don't care for some of the wording(no s) ing is plural itself, jeez......lol i'm just messing