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UTi
06/27/03, 07:58 AM
Your There -

you kno that you really dont have to care
but for some reason your always there
ill thank you until the day i die
i kno your there for me when i cry

your my friend my brother my air
i hope you kno ill always care
we fight we argue over everything we say
we will rest in glory one day...one day

the end of the world in front of me
with no one else id rather be
friends till the end well the end is near
you seem to take away all of my fear

your my friend my brother my air
i hope you kno that ill always care
we fight we argue over everyting we say
we will rest in glory one day...one day

together we hate we love we fly
alone we scream we curse we lie
i need you here by my side tonight
we can get thru this last fight

ive let it go ive let go of my feelings
we can grow apart or into one
ill be by your side till the world is done

scbloodyromance
06/22/05, 08:14 AM
I really dont like songs that always ryme at the end of the line.. Sorry

takingback98
06/22/05, 09:28 AM
yeah dont try so hard to put ryhme into it.

punkpixie
06/22/05, 10:24 AM
Your There -

you kno that you really dont have to care
but for some reason your always there
ill thank you until the day i die
i kno your there for me when i cry

your my friend my brother my air
i hope you kno ill always care
we fight we argue over everything we say
we will rest in glory one day...one day

the end of the world in front of me
with no one else id rather be
friends till the end well the end is near
you seem to take away all of my fear

your my friend my brother my air
i hope you kno that ill always care
we fight we argue over everyting we say
we will rest in glory one day...one day

together we hate we love we fly
alone we scream we curse we lie
i need you here by my side tonight
we can get thru this last fight

ive let it go ive let go of my feelings
we can grow apart or into one
ill be by your side till the world is done

Ummm...is your username supposed to stand for Urinary Tract Infection?

ArTkY_
06/22/05, 10:27 AM
Ummm...is your username supposed to stand for Urinary Tract Infection?
HAHAHAAHA

kimosabe
06/22/05, 10:31 AM
PLease...i NEED FEEDBACK
no, what you need is a severe head injury caused by a lead pipe.

scbloodyromance
06/22/05, 11:44 AM
lmao. Mabey i shouldnt have brought this thread back up.. hahah

IAmCountryMusic
06/22/05, 11:58 AM
he knew you were going to hurt his feelings in the future, so he never came back.

merv the perv
06/22/05, 12:05 PM
I stopped reading when the first line used the wrong form of "your" and you spelled "know" incorrectly.

Alex Djaferis
06/22/05, 12:30 PM
Ummm...is your username supposed to stand for Urinary Tract Infection?

hahahaha.

IAmCountryMusic
06/22/05, 02:51 PM
is this about your boyfriend?

Throwback
06/22/05, 03:24 PM
Stupid.Stupid.Stupid.Stupid.Stupid. Stupid.Stupid.Stupid.Stupid.Stupid. Stupid.Stupid.Stupid.

Stop using the words 'fears' and 'tears' in songs. In other news, Tears For Fears is still a sweet band.

ArTkY_
06/22/05, 04:40 PM
I just realized this is 2 years old.

scbloodyromance
06/22/05, 08:17 PM
I just realized this is 2 years old.


I know, thats what i was saying. I accidently brought it back up.