Yours Truly

[UTi]

YOURS TRULY -


dear my former dearest friend
who i thought was mine till the end
maybe you will learn from this letter
u should have treated me better

you loved me, or so you said
i loved you, but you watched as i bled
i let out all of my passion in you
but you just ignored what i do

ill sign this letter goodbye with a P.S.
it was your fault all this was a mess
yours truly, your past love
yours truly, your magic dove
yours truly, your only one
yours truly, were done

i thought we could last it thru the night
but that dosent work when u think it every night
should i give up? should i surrender?
what word can i make be my ender?

its not that what we had wasnt great
i wish i could just blame it on fate
but this was all your fault...always was
theres no follow to because

ill sign this letter goodbye with a PS
it was your fault all this was a mess
yours truly, your past love
Yours truly, your magic dove
Yours truly, your only one
Yours truly, were fuckin done

as you may have guessed im leaving
cant decide on my tragic ending
i was yours you turned me away
its your fault im not there today

Yours truly, im leaving today for good
Yours truly, i tried the hardest i could
Yours truly, today its all gone
Yours truly, i leave you this song

[Alex Djaferis]

haha, you write ok, but the ryhmes start to get a bit much after a while. i dont often ryhme so maybe ignore me :)

[decisionpending]

yeah, it's alright... the rhyming in some places is good... and in other places terrible

[rkchick]

dude, those guys who say you ryming sucks are ***s. they have no taste. I loved it so awsome. but maybe because its my style. please keep writing songs, u r great at it