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[RickeyScene]

We're going down, down in an earlier round
and sugar we're going down swinging.

But seriously...

I fell in love with a girl once.
I don't know where she went
I have a rare picture of us.
You're smiling,
my lips are on your cheek.
Do you remember?
Does it mean anything to you?
I haven't seen that face in a while.
Wonder how you've been.

This is the first love song I've ever written.

I was this boy once.
How things have changed.
With a picture labeled love.
I'm cutting us apart.
The stereotypical straight-line fractures
of a drawing of a broken heart.
The mirror forgets how I looked at her.
My hands forget how to feel for yours.
Oh, what did I do wrong?

This is the first love song I've ever written.
This is the only love song I'll ever write.

Hopeless comes to mind.
Despair and inevitability follow close behind.
Apathy, I just couldn't feel.
It's going to take more than tape and glue
to put me back together with you.
Who knew love and hate made such a lovely couple?
The lies, the loss, the lust, the lust, the lust.
We'll find a way, if it's meant to be
because this is what they don't tell you about love.

This is the first love song I've ever written.
This is the only love song I'll ever write.
This is the most beautiful love song I've ever written
because this is what love is,
this is what love is,
this is what love is,
this is love.

Not too happy with the last verse (Hopeless...)

[a speedo model]

This is alright, but it has a lot of cliches and lines that just aren't any good. But continue to write, this shows promise so with more time you'll learn how to use it.