MaybeOneDay
06/28/03, 04:54 AM
you can all give me shit for not posting this in the correct forum, but ye know, not many people actually read the stuff posted over there. this is a new song i just wrote, just give me feedback on it. if you hate it, thats fine, but at least read it. if you like it, then rock on. but yeah, give it a shot.
"The Cycle Of Your Life"
By Brandon Alllin
Verse 1
I look around this empty room
I can't imagine what I'd do
Without this place, a part of my life
It's hard to tell if i'd even survive
The bed's are made, the light's are off
The time's have changed but there not lost
The memories will always last
Captured in our photograph's
So tell us how it feel's or,
Chorus
Just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And and another day gone by because
The clock is ticking out
The word's falling from our mouth's
From far and in between
Our live's won't be the same
As me
Verse 2
The only day's I felt alive
Were spent here on the summer night's
Sitting on the dock till 4 AM
Watching the sunrise once again
The door's are locked, the place is clean
In a year where will we be
I can't forget the moment's we shared
Am I the only one, who ever cared ?
Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And another night gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The words falling from out mouth's
Day's far and in between
And your life won't be the same
As me....
Bridge
So you say, all you ever wanted
Was a second chance at doing
All the things that you did wrong
And you scream because you never
Got to tell one how you feel
About this place that they are leaving
And were never coming back again
Were never coming back again
As I look around this empty room I
Can't imagine what i'd do I
Would scream in bitter sorrow I'd
Be dreading waking up tommorrow
I guess I thought this would never end I
Knew someday we'd leave this place and
I don't know if I
Can listen to the clock
The clock is ticking out
This day and night somehow, one more time
Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And another night gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The words falling from out mouth's
Day's far and in between
And your life won't be the same
As me....
End Lines
We pack our bag's and say goodbye
Another year has passed us by
"The Cycle Of Your Life"
By Brandon Alllin
Verse 1
I look around this empty room
I can't imagine what I'd do
Without this place, a part of my life
It's hard to tell if i'd even survive
The bed's are made, the light's are off
The time's have changed but there not lost
The memories will always last
Captured in our photograph's
So tell us how it feel's or,
Chorus
Just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And and another day gone by because
The clock is ticking out
The word's falling from our mouth's
From far and in between
Our live's won't be the same
As me
Verse 2
The only day's I felt alive
Were spent here on the summer night's
Sitting on the dock till 4 AM
Watching the sunrise once again
The door's are locked, the place is clean
In a year where will we be
I can't forget the moment's we shared
Am I the only one, who ever cared ?
Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And another night gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The words falling from out mouth's
Day's far and in between
And your life won't be the same
As me....
Bridge
So you say, all you ever wanted
Was a second chance at doing
All the things that you did wrong
And you scream because you never
Got to tell one how you feel
About this place that they are leaving
And were never coming back again
Were never coming back again
As I look around this empty room I
Can't imagine what i'd do I
Would scream in bitter sorrow I'd
Be dreading waking up tommorrow
I guess I thought this would never end I
Knew someday we'd leave this place and
I don't know if I
Can listen to the clock
The clock is ticking out
This day and night somehow, one more time
Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And another night gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The words falling from out mouth's
Day's far and in between
And your life won't be the same
As me....
End Lines
We pack our bag's and say goodbye
Another year has passed us by