Trust The Roots

[lfdfforever]

if you tell i'll listen from head to toe
because i know it's my only chance to recalm attention
the sentance hasn't dropped
i'm waiting to hear if from bottom to top
how much time do we have?
can you spair a small hour?
it's enough for me to get things said
after this there's no where else to lay
besides the bed you've always dreaded
it's sharp like nails and
welcoming like clean white sheets
your room is flooded and there's no where else to go
this all we have ever known
you spent your life under a weak roof
and below untrusted roots

[theMATEOlife]

your stuff usually isnt bad but this is not your best work.


also, i find it really distracting when a writer doesn't spell check their stuff.

[lfdfforever]

your stuff usually isnt bad but this is not your best work.


also, i find it really distracting when a writer doesn't spell check their stuff. i was really lazy on this one

[theMATEOlife]

i could tell, i like most of your other stuff...thats why i commented.

[lfdfforever]

i could tell, i like most of your other stuff...thats why i commented. thanks, you're stuff is really good