Caterpillar

[PEbeLIEveTE]

Right now I'm in my ball,
Waiting for my time to change.
I'm not yet beautiful,
Like I wish to be.
Later I will change,
And be a wonderful sight to see.
Right now I hate my ugly form,
And curl up tight in a ball,
So you don't have to look at me,
And what I don't want to be.

[a speedo model]

Um..I didn't like this, sorry.

[PEbeLIEveTE]

I don't either, but other people seem to....

[thecurerocks182]

I'm sorry, but i concur with a speedo model for this is terrible. At first I thought it could maybe be targetted at younger children of the ages of 5-7, but then i read the rest, which is to say that it puts an emo twist on something that was once suitable for children. I do not know what troubles me most, the fact that you blatantly registered to post this or that other people seemed to like it. Sorry, I may be in a terrible mood as of today, but this posting is absurd.

[PEbeLIEveTE]

Wow, you sound really smart...makes me feel stupid and insignificant. Congradulations, you are another tally on my list! I don't know why people seemed to like it, the topic was a joke, and idea of it was a joke, and posting it, was to prove to myself, it sucked. So thanks....wait, how is it absurd? My vocabulary isn't broad enough...so sad...

[black rose]

i've had people that have liked my worst of writings [which are pretty damn bad],
but that doesn't mean it's good.
sorry.

[PEbeLIEveTE]

Yeah, I know....