I feel infinite

[wishxfulthinker]

For anyone who has been dissapointed.



Daybreak feels like nothing
But the horizon feels like hope

Never comfort that it's always there
But comfort that there's something more

Daybreak should be beautiful
But the horizon contents my stare

Serenity in a circle
Simple innocence to bear

...But every aspect of perfect

Changes when your deserted.

And everything it depends on
Blew between your lips

The casualties beneath our steps
Desperate for a warmer kiss

And the moment they think they've got it made
Compassion cuts them short

Steel beneath the soul
That my life so ignored

...But every aspect of perfect

Changes when your deserted.

Is common in it's duty
For it holds my soul as well

But life is torn with irony
The perfection before it fell


...But every aspect of perfect

Changes when your deserted.

[hopeshavefallen]

Pretty good...I like the lines in red but only use them twice it would sound much better. You don't want to wear them out