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lfdfforever
11/26/06, 12:54 AM
it's cute to see you struggle
with the mischief you bring on every inch of yourself
much like cradboard you break fairly easy
and obivously there's no way to repair the damage

your stumbing act we surely attract each circus around this town
you were never my favorite clown but i laughed to kill the time away
you wanted me to speak when i had absolutely nothing to say
it's not selfishness, i've just been spending my words on other individuals

how are the supporters holding up?
i would rip them down
but i'm not wasting anymore energy on you
i would rather build this hall higher in the air
where honest friends share
a bond stronger than the ground under your feet

after everything else
what is there to look for?
we can't start off an end
we can't move straight when it's bound to bend
how has it been?
and how will it be?
when you forget that person who was once me

a speedo model
11/26/06, 01:15 PM
Very good. The second verse was a bit weak, I don't know why but it just didn't seem to stand up to the rest. But this is still very good. Nice job, man.

lfdfforever
11/26/06, 01:39 PM
Very good. The second verse was a bit weak, I don't know why but it just didn't seem to stand up to the rest. But this is still very good. Nice job, man. the second verse was actually my favorite lol. oh well, thanks for reading and enjoying.

lfdfforever
11/27/06, 11:14 AM
bump