i wrote this a while back but i would like some opinions suggestions ... plz

[ohreak gurl 08]

I walk through the halls at school,
you glance at me thinking you're so cool
though your starting to think about it all,
and you don't know if you can take the fall

you deny the right to talk to me,
you won't even look my way
and i just can't seem to understand,
why must you do me this way ?
you stab me with you imaginary knife,
plunge it deep into my life
then you start to realize,
you don't know if you're wrong or you're right

you think your so superior
you think your superior to the world
you think your superior to me

when i walk past you i walk with my head down,
hoping that you won't hear me make a sound
if i could ignore you for only one day,
would you say all the thing's i want to say?

you deny the right to talk to me,
you won't even look my way
and i just can't seem to understand,
why must you do me this way ?
you stab me with you imaginary knife,
plunge it deep into my life
then you start to realize,
you don't know if you're wrong or you're right

you think your so superior
you think your superior to the world
you think your superior to me

you think your superior....