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justinevans
11/30/06, 05:24 AM
Cheesy Whatever? I don't care.
Dear Christina,
I’ve been meaning to tell you, I’m looking forward to New Year’s Eve.
The moment where me and you are wedged in between people watching where Broadway meets Seventh Avenue.
We’ll remember our past with hopes for the future are we share sips from a Champagne bottle that I purchased earlier that day.
The moment the sky reads two thousand and seven
I’ll whisper in your ear, “This is what love is supposed to be.”
And while the crowd dissipates full of laughter and smiles, I’ll hold your frame close to mine.
We’ll steady our nerves and taste the best kiss each other has to offer
As our fears blow away like yesterdays rubbish on a windy night
This is what love is supposed to be.
Oh Christina, now do you see that waiting is worth it and our love will surely prevail?
I hope this song works as a reminder of the experience we shared while our lives grow miles away.
I will dream the memories over and over until I hold your hand once again.
This is what love is supposed to be.
This is what love is supposed to be.
justinevans
11/30/06, 07:33 AM
Aweeee so cute!
ha thanks.
a speedo model
11/30/06, 10:42 AM
I really liked this alot. It was able to stay away from cliches and did not become cheesy. Very good.
justinevans
11/30/06, 03:32 PM
I really liked this alot. It was able to stay away from cliches and did not become cheesy. Very good.
thanks man. I'm going to fix it around and add some things later.
TomFoolery
11/30/06, 03:35 PM
Cheesy Whatever? I don't care.
Dear Christina,
I’ve been meaning to tell you, I’m looking forward to New Year’s Eve.
The moment where me and you are wedged in between people watching where Broadway meets Seventh Avenue.
We’ll remember our past with hopes for the future are we share sips from a Champagne bottle that I purchased earlier that day.
The moment the sky reads two thousand and seven
I’ll whisper in your ear, “This is what love is supposed to be.”
And while the crowd dissipates full of laughter and smiles, I’ll hold your frame close to mine.
We’ll steady our nerves and taste the best kiss each other has to offer
As our fears blow away like yesterdays rubbish on a windy night
This is what love is supposed to be.
Oh Christina, now do you see that waiting is worth it and our love will surely prevail?
I hope this song works as a reminder of the experience we shared while our lives grow miles away.
I will dream the memories over and over until I hold your hand once again.
This is what love is supposed to be.
This is what love is supposed to be.
I really enjoy that part. i love this line. my girlfriend is far away from me too and i completally enjoy this song. i wrote a song called Waiting that also touches on this subject. Love is supposed to be something stronger then miles and distances and i really enjoyed this song. Is this a song, or simply a poem. If this is a poem i enjoy it very much, as a song i would not quite see how it would fit to music but i'd love to hear it. Good job
justinevans
11/30/06, 03:46 PM
I really enjoy that part. i love this line. my girlfriend is far away from me too and i completally enjoy this song. i wrote a song called Waiting that also touches on this subject. Love is supposed to be something stronger then miles and distances and i really enjoyed this song. Is this a song, or simply a poem. If this is a poem i enjoy it very much, as a song i would not quite see how it would fit to music but i'd love to hear it. Good job
poem. It is still a rough draft, now that I look at it. There are some things I'd like to add and clean up.
Cutiefacex3
12/03/06, 01:31 PM
You better post this after you change whatever it is that you plan to change. But just so you know, I think it's perfect as it is.
RomeoAGoGo
12/03/06, 01:57 PM
This reminds me of Alligator Alligators - Trophy Scars.
justinevans
12/03/06, 08:02 PM
thanks people.
Great job man. I really don't see any problem with it.
justinevans
12/04/06, 06:52 AM
Great job man. I really don't see any problem with it.
thanks.
Awww, this is so cute! I really do love it.
justinevans
12/04/06, 09:40 PM
Awww, this is so cute! I really do love it.
thank you.
Ponyboy
12/05/06, 04:18 AM
great stuff man, great stuff
justinevans
12/05/06, 05:34 AM
great stuff man, great stuff
thanks.
lfdfforever
12/05/06, 05:35 AM
great job dude
justinevans
12/05/06, 05:36 AM
great job dude
thanks man.
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