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hopeshavefallen
07/03/03, 06:43 AM
Trust me you'll love the view.
You'll love the colors from way up here.
So fly to me, come take my hands.
The sky's stained red, the whole world's a blur.
So long!
We finnally make sense.
This engine wont quit, we're up here for good.
Piston's screaming, but you're not scared.
We float like we're made for this.
You know that you're were made for this.
Ten thousand miles high, we're finnally real.





i thought i would post something not my best work but i like it none the less.

earlynovemberX
07/07/03, 05:32 PM
good... alot happier than the other stuff i have read. sort of reminds me of a june spirit song..

BuriedAlive
07/07/03, 09:17 PM
it was ok it could use some work

Rufio217
07/08/03, 05:36 AM
i liked it, possibly cahnge a sentence or two, but pretty good form what i have been reading