the nothingness that surrounds deep inside

[decisionpending]

alright i wrote this one in the past ten minutes so comment please, that would be great!

'the nothingness that surrounds deep inside'

i lay and watch the ceiling
fatigue sets in
everything is beige
as emptiness begins

this heart was beating strong
it used to cry
it used to laugh
it used to sing
now it's cold and rancid
it does not cry
it does not laugh
it does nothing

i sit on my roof
staring at the stars
but they can not comfort me
as emptiness begins

this heart was beating strong
it used to cry
it used to laugh
it used to sing
now it's cold and rancid
it does not cry
it does not laugh
it does nothing

emotionless and dead
struck upon my chest
i don't feel
i don't feel
sickness embedded
stuck upon my head
i am nothing
i am nothing

it used to cry
it used to laugh
it used to sing
it does not cry
it does not laugh
it does nothing
i am nothing

[fakeplasticguns]

It reminds me of I Hate Myself for some reason. Good stuff though.

[decisionpending]

i'm just bumping this up to some more replies :)

[BuriedAlive]

ya pretty good