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View Full Version : this song is very personal to me so see what you guys think about it...


cortney
07/05/03, 04:07 AM
TINKERBELL

verse1
where do we start today
staring at the screen of dreams
shaking in fear as you tell me the truth
crying to believe the love of a unknown girl
acting away as if things are fine
swalling my pain for a crest of pride
wishing one moment to hold you
to breathe some life into you
dreaming the moment when i kiss your hand
wishing to hear you one last time

chorus
we started a fire without the match
burning the happiness of a improved past
not half the plan we want it to be
time to believe and break ourselves free

verse2
we'll never forget the life we've lived
ill scar your name into my skin
people laugh and people smile
people live and people die
id give everything to swap your fate
but the path is taken we hope you forgive
this love is not a parading march
but a sorrowful tear to fall below

verse3
every breath ive ever drew
is the precious thought of loving you
me dear tinkerbell please dont cry
we love you baby we wont deny
that things got out of hand
but your our baby no mistake.

this is just a little acoustic song i thought up but the lyrics are very personal.

wadejunkie
07/05/03, 05:02 AM
i thought a lot of it was good, but you have grammar mistakes