10 Reasons That I Am A Celebrity of the Real World

[mz_isabella]

Verse 1

Ten, I'm being recognized on MySpace
Nine, the girls envy my greatest reputation
Eight, the gangsta guys get at me
Seven, my lyrics are poems of history
Six, Chicago is where I get my kicks

Verse 2

Five, I was a landmark of my high school
Four, I know nothing about the dangers of the matter
Three, I don't joke about celebrity rumors
Two, I wake up to only flashbacks
One, I appreciate no more lashing about my songs

Hook

No paparazzi, no groupies
and no cameramen attacking me

Chorus

Driven by desire, driven by fame
Driven by fortune without guilt or shame

©01 December 2006, Catrina Charlene aka Mz. Isabellahttp://www.xanga.com/images/heart2.gif

[IAmAmazing]

I'm not gonna say anything

[sputniksignals]

OH god

[GoWaitInTheCar]

......

[Low Level Owl]

i thought about it...then i laughed really hard.

[black rose]

ummmm....

wow.

[a speedo model]

The sad thing is I know this is serious.

Here's your problem: You use cheesy and cliche lines, that feel like you're trying to use them to be clever and yet you're not. And that's what kills it. You're using uninteresting and overused lines that do nothing to reader. And all the while you have this tone of someone who think they're writing the next anthem of our generation which really pisses me off.

[black rose]

rule number 1:
never put the word myspace in your song unless your travis from GCH.
and you're not.

[redxraine]

rule number 1:
never put the word myspace in your song unless your travis from GCH.
and you're not.

that's exactly what i was going to say. but then you stole it. :-)

you should try writing about something you actually know. unless, you know, you really are famous. and then you still shouldn't write like this because you'll come off as stuck up. sorry. just being honest.

[Kanashii]

Haha...

I don't think this was meant to be.. serious? I mean, it's not the best, but yeah... I understand the humor.

"Six, Chicago is where I get my kicks"
Oh yeah? What kind of kicks do you have?

[theMATEOlife]

the use of the list of numbers right away indicated that this was not to be taken seriously. try to make it less of a didactic listing of the reasons you are awesome. if you're going to do something like this at least go for something subtle and clever.

[OveriseFan]

the use of the list of numbers right away indicated that this was not to be taken seriously. try to make it less of a didactic listing of the reasons you are awesome. if you're going to do something like this at least go for something subtle and clever.

One...
Become the widowed son.

(Anathallo used listing numbers very well... Upsettingly, their full length isn't consistent at all... :-()

[theMATEOlife]

i don't think that song's lyrics are that great.

they're ok.

every song that uses listing numbers like that reminds me of brian mcknight, and that is a very sad thing.