Xo

[suddenxsilence]

wow i was going through my poetry books and found this poem from july. it is quite possibly the most emo thing i have ever written. so please don't point that out because i already know it. i was in a very bad state of mind when i wrote this...


XO
XO
Will the blood fall in the shape of the wounds
The slashes that you have left in my heart
I wonder if you really know what you have done
How weak and defensless you've left me
You should know that your touch still makes my knees go weak
Even though I feel like you left me damaged
I know to you, I'm now just a friend
That's not what I want, but something more
If this is what I am stuck with then I would rather have nothing at all
Maybe one day I'll be able to tell you the way I feel
But right now I'm too afraid of what you will think
What if you hate, me going down this old rode again
I don't watn to ruin what I have left of you
But I'm not sure what I even have left.....
Girl likes Boy
Boy likes Girl
Why can't it be that easy?







Now please be kind. This was a really old poem... for me(I generally write like four a week). So yeah it may not flow right but I don't care. My thoughts just kind of spilled on the page.

[Mike Kraft]

very mediocre and filled with cliches

[black rose]

this is kinda crap... just so you know.just using your own words.
if you know this doesn't flow and you know it's very "emo" than why post it?
why not post something you are extremely proud of?
post something that after you're finished with it, you take a sigh of relief and feel good.

[xmy.only.exitx]

yeah.it lacks the depth that a good song has and is too directly on.

[a speedo model]

The lines are all overused/cliche and they offer nothing to draw the reader in. But keep writing, it takes time.

[ben pequeno]

LMAO, why even bother?