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xmy.only.exitx
12/12/06, 11:28 PM
it was december when we wrote that letter,
it said we'd be best friends forever,
then shivering but bold we cut our wrists
and made a blood pact that no longer exists.
i always feared the distant demons
that loomed on my horizons
and clung to your arms for safety
but how was i to know that those same arms would one day rise up against me.
i cried, i died within myself,
the word friendship it sounded so fake,
just like the smell of your blood on that letter,
a promise you didn't have to take.

xmy.only.exitx
12/12/06, 11:29 PM
any suggestions are welcome.

a speedo model
12/13/06, 04:57 AM
Hmmm...

the rhyming feels to forced and the wording/imagery is just too cliche

SLADE775
12/13/06, 08:56 AM
hahahahaahahahahahahahaha

What an idiot you must be.

Go fuck yourself, and please.....don't post any more garbage.

SaoMattie
12/13/06, 08:59 AM
hahahahaahahahahahahahaha

What an idiot you must be.

Go fuck yourself, and please.....don't post any more garbage.

haha, Slade always brings the pwn

theMATEOlife
12/13/06, 12:33 PM
i'm tired of people talking about cutting their wrists and such. it's ridiculous.

try again though.

IAmAmazing
12/13/06, 12:41 PM
hahahahaahahahahahahahaha

What an idiot you must be.

Go fuck yourself, and please.....don't post any more garbage.
What Slade said