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SLADE775
12/13/06, 01:10 AM
Misanthropology

I think it’s time for me to go out there
I point with my line of sight
My Brother stares
Like I’m out of my mind
I’m out of my mind
That’s the idea I find
Appealing


Certain entrapment
Tell me, if I build a bridge will you help me cross it?
Or will you clip the supports
As I reach the border


People in cities
Are so stuck on their tasks
And stuck in their, polished comities
For mere pennies
A puzzle piece in the grand scheme of things
They want to fit so badly
That’s never been me


Certain entrapment
Tell me, if I build a bridge will you help me cross it?
Or will you clip the supports
As I reach the border
Walk back home
Don’t mention a word
Be forlorn
As if you never had a brother at all

I read this on a
wall in Ohio
If The sky mirrors the surface
A replica over water
Endless over all others
There's no such thing as structure

SLADE775
12/13/06, 01:42 PM
This song will be on my bands full length.

fifpb99
12/13/06, 02:14 PM
Tell me, if I build a bridge will you help me cross it?


Be forlorn








The 1st line seems too cliche, unless you were going for that. Forlorn isn't a bad choice of words it just seemed out of place to me... but, maybe it fits better with the music to it. Really nice besides those 2 minor gripes. Have you recorded it yet?

SLADE775
12/13/06, 03:32 PM
The 1st line seems too cliche, unless you were going for that. Forlorn isn't a bad choice of words it just seemed out of place to me... but, maybe it fits better with the music to it. Really nice besides those 2 minor gripes. Have you recorded it yet?

It's supposed to be as if he's looing toward the desert.

And It fits with the music.

Thanks for the input.

fifpb99
12/13/06, 03:40 PM
It's supposed to be as if he's looing toward the desert.

And It fits with the music.

Thanks for the input.

Ok, cool then. When will your full length be out?

a speedo model
12/13/06, 04:05 PM
I like this Slade, when will be recording this or have you already done that?

OveriseFan
12/13/06, 07:44 PM
:thumbsup:

Some really quality stuff here: And I like the structure of this poem.

Is your band staying away from screaming now? If I remeber correctly, the last two songs you posted had no screaming and it sounded awesome.

Either way, I'm looking forward to it.

SLADE775
12/14/06, 09:17 AM
Thanks a lot guys.

Our EP isn't even out yet.....but we have a bunch of songs written for our LP (Human Architechture) so we probably won't be recording for a few months.

We're in talks with Gotham Records out of NY so we'll see how that goes.

a speedo model
12/14/06, 09:20 AM
Awesome. Hope all goes well.

unwritten
12/14/06, 09:21 AM
Sounds good to me.

Alex Djaferis
12/14/06, 09:24 AM
that was pretty good man.