My 'Fuck You' song. Everyone has one. This is mine.

[wishxfulthinker]

When the distance reigns your fears and nothing is left
But the hollow sound deep in your chest and the easy breaking of your heart
Will you still stand here
Will you still stand here
Or will you be the one that falls or will you be the one whose falling
When the distance reigns your smile and nothing is left
But those drying years that wasted your time and the drying years of your life
Are you still passive
Are you still passive
Or will you be the one that screams or will you be the one whose screaming ( take care )

Living the let down am I your salvage from the wreck
Dying to get down am I your failure for what's next
I hear you gasping, I hear you breathing
Did you leave any air for me
Did you leave any air for me ( take care )

When the distance reigns your guilt and nothing is left
But the scars that cut into your conscious and the voices that scream to keep your promise
Do you still swear
Do you still swear
Or will you be the one who breaks or will you be the one whose breaking
When the distance reigns your blood and nothing is left
But the empty waste you call your soul and the destruction of your battered morals
Are you still laughing
Are you still laughing
Or will you be the one to choke or will you be the one whose choking ( take care )

Living the let down am I your salvage from the wreck
Dying to get down am I your failure for what's next
I hear you gasping, I hear you breathing
Did you leave any air for me
Did you leave any air for me ( take care )

Tell me all the times you said my name in vain
( take care )
Tell me all the ways you'd swear that you have changed
( take care )
And tell me then how I should keep forever quiet
( take care )
From where your sitting I'm the only one to blame
( I hate you )

Living the let down am I your salvage from the wreck
Dying to get down am I your failure for what's next
I hear you gasping, I hear you breathing
Did you leave any air for me
Did you leave any air for me ( take care )

[Korvans]

Originally posted by wishxfulthinker
When the distance reigns your fears and nothing is left
But the hollow sound deep in your chest and the easy breaking of your heart
Will you still stand here
Will you still stand here
Or will you be the one that falls or will you be the one whose falling
When the distance reigns your smile and nothing is left
But those drying years that wasted your time and the drying years of your life
Are you still passive
Are you still passive
Or will you be the one that screams or will you be the one whose screaming ( take care )

Living the let down am I your salvage from the wreck
Dying to get down am I your failure for what's next
I hear you gasping, I hear you breathing
Did you leave any air for me
Did you leave any air for me ( take care )

When the distance reigns your guilt and nothing is left
But the scars that cut into your conscious and the voices that scream to keep your promise
Do you still swear
Do you still swear
Or will you be the one who breaks or will you be the one whose breaking
When the distance reigns your blood and nothing is left
But the empty waste you call your soul and the destruction of your battered morals
Are you still laughing
Are you still laughing
Or will you be the one to choke or will you be the one whose choking ( take care )

Living the let down am I your salvage from the wreck
Dying to get down am I your failure for what's next
I hear you gasping, I hear you breathing
Did you leave any air for me
Did you leave any air for me ( take care )

Tell me all the times you said my name in vain
( take care )
Tell me all the ways you'd swear that you have changed
( take care )
And tell me then how I should keep forever quiet
( take care )
From where your sitting I'm the only one to blame
( I hate you )

Living the let down am I your salvage from the wreck
Dying to get down am I your failure for what's next
I hear you gasping, I hear you breathing
Did you leave any air for me
Did you leave any air for me ( take care )

lol this is such horseshit....horrible...stop trying to be like finch so much

[wishxfulthinker]

Well it made for a good song, so if the words suck - at least not all was lost. ;)
Thanks for the...intelligent...criticism.

[BuriedAlive]

ya its a not that good of a song, and neither is any of finch's songs so they both have something in common, plus i think it was kinda long

[Rufio217]

You guys are all such hipocrits....if that song were written by any major, decent, credible band, you would all be liek it's brilliant, i love it, blah blah blah blah blah....

[GREENatarisDAY]

i dont know guys, that song wasnt that bad and it didnt sound too much like finch.

[decisionpending]

i like the chorus but the verses and bridge just don't strike me... so i would say that it would be average lyrics, but i'm a firm believer that a good song doesn't nesessarliy need good lyrics, so without music it's impossible to say if it's a good song or not

[bpace18]

who is the artist of this song? i really like it

[The_kok]

You guys are all such hipocrits....if that song were written by any major, decent, credible band, you would all be liek it's brilliant, i love it, blah blah blah blah blah....

no I wouldn't

[villevalo1666]

I would take this song and instead of rejecting criticism, I would take the criticism to edit edit edit and make a better version of this. You see, you can't just slap down words on a paper and call it a song. You revise, re-read, revise and revise re-read it again and revise some more. Its a process, not a one time thing.