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Slaytus
12/14/06, 05:58 PM
When will the inadequate overcome the adequate
and not have to relapse and collapse into myself
When will the imperfect out-due the perfect
and not have to relapse and collapse into myself
Portray and display this mediocre mimicry of life at half-mast,
half-past midnight in the dismal twilight of streetlights,
manipulating and manifesting in the ever-increasing yet ever shrinking Mute City
When may I relapse and collapse, into arms other then my own?
Set out toward the setting sun in hopes of something more
Praying in fear and faith of something greater,
with no reason to turn tail
Straddle me down, run me to the ground, drag me around
Nothing more then a sinking ship
Regret tied itself somewhere around me,
constantly reminding me-
I can’t carry even my own weight

My best has never been and will never come to be
I’m not the boy I was, but never the man I will be
The swell of the ocean and the swell of my own
"Tie me up!"
(Drop Anchor!)
"Untie me!"
When was I ever brave?
When was I ever anything at all?




yep

Signals Corrupted
12/14/06, 06:00 PM
you like mewithoutyou, dont you

lfdfforever
12/14/06, 07:37 PM
tie me up untie me tehehehe, this is pretty good

fifpb99
12/15/06, 09:28 AM
I liked it overall -- Tie Me Up! Untie Me! was definitely ripped from a song of theirs (can't tell if it was intentional or not...) but it rhymed well and flowed great, didn't feel forced at all for the most part.

a speedo model
12/15/06, 02:50 PM
I liked this alot. Very nice work.