Laugh It Up Boy

[lfdfforever]

this joke had us laughing the angry minutes away
the punch line exploded between us
sending a happniess through my skin
that modern media can't even compare to
trurn off the t.v and talk to us
i can't wait for the next laugh
i need that rush of happy blood
through my up tight veins
i need the joy of perfect laughing words
it's the simplest thing we've done to have a good time
we lost our problems in such a fortunate haze
i remember that over everything else
i prayed for it's return right after it's leaving
one more joke sir
one more simple memorie to fit in my history frame
one more laugh to spill joy on us
just one more loving sentance
that's all we ask

[a speedo model]

Good stuff, man.

[theMATEOlife]

we lost our problems in such a fortunate haze


good work man

love that line

[lfdfforever]

Good stuff, man. thanks brother

[lfdfforever]

we lost our problems in such a fortunate haze


good work man

love that linesweet, thanks for enjoying it

[fifpb99]

we lost our problems in such a fortunate haze


good work man

love that line

I agree -- thats a great line.

[lfdfforever]

I agree -- thats a great line. thanks dude

[lfdfforever]

poop

[thecurerocks182]

this joke had us laughing the angry minutes away
the punch line exploded between us
sending a surge of (just a suggestion) happniess through my skin (veins? They seem to fit better with the imagery)
that modern media is incomparable to.
turn off the t.v and talk to us
i can't wait for the next laugh;
i need that rush of electric blood (the word happy is too overused in this poem..I thought I'd suggest a possible replacement)
through my uptight veins.
i need the joy of perfect laughing words <uninspiring
it's the simplest thing we've done to have a good time
we lost our problems in such a fortunate haze i like
i remember that over everything else
i prayed for it's return right after it's leaving
one more joke sir
one more simple memorie to fit in my history frame
one more laugh to spill joy on us
just one more loving sentence
that's all we ask
It was alright...you have written a lot better. Perhaps, I'm just missing the message you were trying to convey.

[lfdfforever]

It was alright...you have written a lot better. Perhaps, I'm just missing the message you were trying to convey.yeah most of it was filling, i've been off lately

[suddenxsilence]

that's pretty good man. i'm a bit confused though on whether you are talking about life in general or one specific relationship. it kind of seemed like you were trying to say both.

[lfdfforever]

that's pretty good man. i'm a bit confused though on whether you are talking about life in general or one specific relationship. it kind of seemed like you were trying to say both.it's about laughing and thanks for enjoying it