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decisionpending
07/07/03, 01:55 PM
'tears on the dance floor (angie)'

i just wrote this while sitting here on the computer in the pervious twenty minutes or so... some commentary would be great

it's too late 'cause now you got your feet stuck in the mud
you drop your eyes 'cause you know there'll be tears on the dance floor
she wants a piece of you but you are sinking ever further down
you've made your bed but now you gotta go, you gotta go lay in it

another stupid disgrace another fuckin' tragedy
another boy and girl story that doesn't end happily

it's too late 'cause now you realise you're different
you drop your eyes 'cause you know there'll be blood on the dance floor
Angie's just a little girl mixed up in big girl's game
you've fucked around with her and now you've gotta face the consequences

another stupid disgrace another fuckin' tragedy
another girl loves boy story that doesn't end happily

take a look at the lights that surround you
take a look at the girl that's beneath you
take a look at yourself and tell me
is it worth it now? is it worth it now???

you've spoiled this innocence
you've ruined this happiness
you've fucked her around and now you've gotta face the consequences

another stupid disgrace another fuckin' tragedy
another boy and girl story that doesn't end happily
another stupid disgrace another fuckin' tragedy
another girl loves boy story that doesn't end happily
but the boy doen't love the girl...

punk_rock_poet
07/07/03, 03:03 PM
thats really good! u should link a recourding to a site or sumthing so ppl can hear it. i loved that!!!!

Rufio217
07/07/03, 05:18 PM
not too shabby, for a spur of the moment 15 minute song...

lifelesslove
07/07/03, 05:18 PM
yah, it could definitely be a great pop punk song, but if that's not wat your hoping for with it, then i'm sorry. seems to have great rhyming, and can roll along pretty well...

earlynovemberX
07/07/03, 05:20 PM
heavy.

BuriedAlive
07/07/03, 09:14 PM
it was ok, the ended made up for the rather poor quality begining i liked the last half of the song where you started with take a look, and after that the song was good but i didnt really like it before, it just didnt really go together