She's Magic

[ch4rles027]

It's been so long since I wanna send something here and today I go ahead....

I’m running,
She’s flying,
I’m swimming,
She’s flying,
I’m drowning,
She’s still flying and she let me die,


How can I reach her?
How can I fly with her?
This is not lust,
Not even love,
This is simply marvel,
Marvel at her fly with bewitching magic.

Upon the ground,
I see her fly,
I’m loosing her,
And forever it will,
Seem to be a wasted,
But I live seventeen years of my life without her,
I can live the remainder.

[suddenxsilence]

It's good but the bad grammar kind of threw me off so that I wasn't exactly sure what you were trying to say. Other than that it is pretty good. It just seems a bit like everyother "she left me all alone" poem. Keep it up.

[a speedo model]

Eh...I didn't like it.