too true to be good

[ACanOfSpam]

There's this one girl that fakes smiles all the time
No one knows the problems that run through her life
She drowns herself in the lyrics of sad songs
And tears stain her face as she falls in to dreamless sleep

Chorus:
I wish this moment would last a lifetime
A life with you, I'd be in paradise
Your eyes resemble that of a galaxy
Is it just me or did I stop breathing?

She just wants to have fun and have a good time
She convinces herself that there's so many flaws in her life
She's smart, talented, something worth living and dying for
She doesn't waste her time, even though it looks like she does
She has a strong heart, is can stand most things
But too much pressure and it will break

Chorus

She hates herself and no one knows why
No one can stand to watch her cry
She deserves the best and nothing less
She's the kind of person you don't have to impress
She always has something to say
The girls around her wish they were gay

Chorus

I wish this moment would last a lifetime
A life with you, I'd be in paradise
You are just too true to be good
I wanna see you again, if only I could...

[BuriedAlive]

its an ok song just kinda wondering why all of a sudden you started rhyming in the third verse

[Rufio217]

yeah the rhyming on adn off, kind set's it off, as well as the set up of word uses....some sentences just don't maek sense next to one another...