i had your back

[Zack Attack]

title- i had your back( not complete)



I'm gonna be the friend
who pulls the trigger
no doubt you will be
fucked up forever

but that doesn't take
away from the fact
that we used to be boys
i always had your back

my trust was held with you
you stabbed me in the back
but soon enough, you too
will play the part of the fool.


its not even close to done. it about a friend who basically fucks you over and you're out for revenge.

[BuriedAlive]

pretty good, looks like you have some tbs influences

[lifelesslove]

it's bad...and it's not bad for a reason, it's bad cuz you didn't try. it's short, and it has a start, but tell me this isn't the whole song, this needs to get updated, and made longer, or else...lol, and no i don't feel tbs in this at all...just bad for now

[BuriedAlive]

ok for the tbs influence, i meant that cuz he used words from theres no i in team.. which probably helped him write the song. ya it was long and the guys not a good writer but not everyone is as talented as you lifelesslove

[BuriedAlive]

i meant that it was short not long i was typing and not paying attention

[BuriedAlive]

and hes not a good writer yet, lets hope this is just his first few songs, he does need to practice and look for something better to write about

[Zack Attack]

its not even close to done, i just had the topic in my head and thats what i have so far. and yes i am a beginner at this whole writing thing.

[dakknox]

i think the lyrics are pretty rad so far, i'd like to see the final version, later