Cheswicks Dream

[Zack Attack]

Title- Cheswicks Dream
About- my history teacher, i had a major crush on her


the fiery red glow excites me
makes me stop and think
that just maybe, some day
you'll look at me and wink

it makes me stop and think
is life worth living, without you
sleeping next to me

the glistening ivory
makes me ponder
did god do this to tease?
or just plain torture?

you know what you are
i understand quite well
what if i took the chance?
no way in hell!

until this dream comes true
im not sure what i'll do
sit around and ponder
maybe take a few

drown my sorrows, until my dream comes true.

[BuriedAlive]

its ok but i dont really like the pop punk song thats dont make you think much or want you to read it again

[Zack Attack]

yea i know what mean, thats what i was thinking when i wrote it.

[decisionpending]

yeah, you seem to have a good grasp of the whole four line ABCB style of writing and that's a good place to start, my beginning ones were terrible (not to say mine aren't terrible now) and it's an aquired ability, unless you are lifelesslove, bastard!