these lyrics are really bad

[wadejunkie]

but i like doing the song alot, anyway

Dear God: I really hope you like the way im living life now.
I know that if I died tonight, I'd probably go straight to hell.
I'm wrong in everything i do, i feel i cant change.
Living is near impossible, its getting harder each day.
Thick Tears fill my half empty cup, and seeing her overflows.
Sometimes, I can drive all night, theres always some place to go.
September likes to bring out the worst in me.
Try to thank God at night, I never deserve when I recieve.


Define: no purpose in life with one word.
Sometimes, I hate the melody, I hate the songbird.
Help me. I need some point of view, need things made clear.
I want to lose myself, I want to lose this place, want to lose my fear.
I miss, my own self esteem. I miss her words.
My bed, it takes away my time, it takes away my world.
So far from Heaven, too close to Hell. Give me a piece of mind, give me a life.
Please. Give me a life.

[proeuthanasia]

Originally posted by wadejunkie
but i like doing the song alot, anyway

Dear God: I really hope you like the way im living life now.
I know that if I died tonight, I'd probably go straight to hell.
I'm wrong in everything i do, i feel i cant change.
Living is near impossible, its getting harder each day.
Thick Tears fill my half empty cup, and seeing her overflows.
Sometimes, I can drive all night, theres always some place to go.
September likes to bring out the worst in me.
Try to thank God at night, I never deserve when I recieve.


Define: no purpose in life with one word.
Sometimes, I hate the melody, I hate the songbird.
Help me. I need some point of view, need things made clear.
I want to lose myself, I want to lose this place, want to lose my fear.
I miss, my own self esteem. I miss her words.
My bed, it takes away my time, it takes away my world.
So far from Heaven, too close to Hell. Give me a piece of mind, give me a life.
Please. Give me a life.


god dude, i feel that song more than any other song i've read yet. and i wouldn't say that it's 'really bad' because i think it's pretty good...you can tell it's heartfelt and that, in my opinion, is more important in a set of lyrics than flow will ever be. great job. i'm putting it in my sig. do you mind?

[wadejunkie]

thanks man

[proeuthanasia]

i'm a chick, but yeah no problem

[ADecentDay]

I liked it. It could use work in certain places but that might only destruct the purpose of the writing. Many people could relate. I can.