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weez_on
07/11/03, 07:24 AM
HARBOR DRIVE

Today looks like any other day.
Same routines with different endings.
It seems I can only see so far
with painted windows on the wall.
And with street lights as my stars,
I found the perfect hideaway.

Take me down to Harbor Drive.
It's where we've been before.
A 14 hour drive.
I don't care where we go.
My whole plan was to spend as much time with you.

Live a dream each and every day.
Caught between awake and dreams.
Yesteryear was a long windy road.
Let's take a trip, we'll have some fun.
Sail across the Pacific sky
to a paradise near the sun.

I think time will stop for us.
There's no going back from here.
Memories is all we have to gain.
I can only see so far
with painted windows on the wall.

weez_on
07/13/03, 05:29 AM
any feedback??

TheFallenScene
07/13/03, 06:16 AM
The lyrics to your song are awesome man!! Suggestion, remove the words "A 14 Hour Drive". It just kind of makes the song a little tacky but otherwise, great job :D