storm of the century

[decisionpending]

i don't know what to think of this one, wrote it while a little sleepy at 2am... commentary would be great!!!

'storm of the century'

in this winter daze
i sit on the beach
taking in the view
of a wild, untamed storm
the waves crash harder and deeper
down to the ocean floor
perilous to the victims
caught in the downfall

drown these thoughts
drown this life
give in to the sea
give in to this god

the storm of the century
now to be remembered
by my closest relatives
as the last time that i...

drown these thoughts
drown this life
give in to the sea
give in to this god

the waves rise higher than ever before
the sand retracts back into the ocean
the seaside houses disappear
along with me

violent and unforgiving
beautiful now calm...

i swim with treasures of the deep
diving deeper into shipwrecks
for now this is where i live
for now this is where i live

drown these thoughts
drown this life
give in to the sea
give in to this god
drown me now
i'm losing my breath
i want to surface
but i give in for eternity

[dakknox]

drown these thoughts
drown this life
give in to the sea
give in to this god

i don't know how these lyrics are intended but i see them a good part of the song, if these lyrics were shouted or yelled a bit i think it could sound pretty rad, later

[ADecentDay]

I love the relations. The title to the meaning. The ocean. Its very good.

[decisionpending]

just bumping it up... i want more replies for this one now... i like more than when i wrote it

[BuriedAlive]

it was an ok song. nothing that impressed me.

[decisionpending]

just bumping it again, i would love wewin to post in his detailed and brutal way and i would love anyone else who hasn't yet commented to comment!!! :D

[Rufio217]

alright song, with a cool sound to it, it'd be neat, though it's nothing killer....yet with a litle tweaking it'd cool