Still A Mystery

[K-Boy13]

I sit and pray that rain will go away/
That another day will pass and I’ll remain/
Please God when you take me make it easy/
In my sleep during my dreams this is what I plead/
On my knees I’ll fall and cry wondering why/
This life has seemed to pass me by wasted time/
All alone and it’s my fault remembered friends but emotions forgot/
How will I carry on when my only one is gone//

I sense that you will be right by me/
Beside me never leaving’s likely/
And I don’t know where you could be/
But one day I’ll find you hopefully//

When my body aches and you can’t relate/
You take faith and make it go away/
For my sake I hope you stay cause I love you/
It is true yet you’re still a mystery, true love is written in history/
So I know you’ll be good to me one day when I discover/
Our love sent from above in my opinion it’s God’s gift to men/
Women but I will defend that love can’t be pretended/
When your heart is broken I will mend it//

I sense that you will be right by me/
Beside me never leaving’s likely/
And I don’t know where you could be/
But one day I’ll find you hopefully//

Still a mystery you’re still a mystery, still a mystery you’re still a mystery, still a mystery, mystery, MYSTERY

I sense that you will be right by me/
Beside me never leaving’s likely/
And I don’t know where you could be/
But one day I’ll find you hopefully//




Note: This song is about my belief that everyone has a true love. This song shows that I haven't met mine yet, but I still know when I do I'll love her and she'll be there for me.

[a speedo model]

This isn't that bad. You seem to lean on lines that are overrused in writing. But that's a mistake early writers make. Just continue to write.

[apoemtothedead]

This is complete shit.

Note: This response is about my belief that your poem/song is complete shit.

[lostfear]

gahhh, it has what looks like the same type of bridge as the other one I just read.

try to make your songs unique play around with rhyming you can do a lot of different things,

positivs about these lyrics: the overall concepts presented are much deeper, and therefore making it more enjoyable to read.

so keep writing.