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sleep
01/06/07, 08:05 PM
my heart feels funny :)

Cause you know i love you.
so what do i have to prove
Cause I LOVE YOU
we can have a party just for you.
CAUSE I LOVE YOU( soft whisper "cause i love you")

no one else just me and you.
hand on heart , lip to lip
just don't forget to breathe in.

I'd die for you
CAUSE I LOVE YOU

We'll drive all the way to canada just for your favorite icecream.
but the funnest part would be with you.
CAUSE I LOVE YOU

we'd be togethor until we look like prunes.
but i'd still love you.
but do you love me?..
(whisper:"i love you..... ")

Scottt
01/06/07, 08:10 PM
''CAUSE I LOVE YOU'' is repeated too often.
And some of the lines look like you've just put a word because you couldn't think of anything else.
E.g. '' we'd be togethor until we look like prunes''

secretsociety92
01/06/07, 08:13 PM
prunes, hahahahha!! that isnt anything i haven't seen before apart from being worse than usual

sleep
01/06/07, 08:53 PM
good i was bored and had fun it snot like ima be famous for it

Scottt
01/06/07, 08:58 PM
good i was bored and had fun it snot like ima be famous for it


That doesn't make sense.

sleep
01/06/07, 09:02 PM
he said it was worse then usual i just said that i dont really care i had fun writing it and it's not like im actually gonna be famour for this particular song

Scottt
01/06/07, 09:04 PM
he said it was worse then usual i just said that i dont really care i had fun writing it and it's not like im actually gonna be famour for this particular song


Couldn't be more correct.