Yesterday. I dont have a clue, its up to you all to decide. Im at your mercy.

[ADecentDay]

Yesterday (7/11/03)

Push pins feel like nine inch nails,
You leave your words like unfollowed trails.
Im in the dark the lights are dead,
In the darkness there I read.
" I promise I will love you more than yesterday...."

The pain is so thick you could cut it with a knife,
But with that pain I cut away your life.
Youve been gone for two whole years,
I still have scars and I still have fears.
"I didnt love you yesterday."

The consuming darkness begins to scratch,
Because I found a hope, a light, a match.
Now the begining ends and the end begins
The light grows as the darkness dims.
The sadness lifts along with the dread,
And in the glorious light I read.
"I can be myself again, even better than yesterday."

[wadejunkie]

i was gonna say it was too dark, but i like how it changes throughout the song.

cool NIN reference

[dakknox]

i liked it how you said the darkness began to dim as it got lighter, i thought that was pretty cool, later

[decisionpending]

very very cool, that is rhyming lyrics at their best, i applaud!!! my favourite part is the quotes at the end of each stanza, gold...

[ADecentDay]

12 views and only 3 replies. Please review everyone. I would truly appreciate. Be as brutal as you wish. Thank you to the people who have replied already.

[decisionpending]

there is always much more views than replies, just be grateful for the replies you are getting... by the way, thanx for replying on mine :)

[Rufio217]

i liked it, someparts could be better, but that's the same for all songs...overall the fade from darkness to light was good...

[Zack Attack]

that was a cool song. good job.