Another song for you guys to check out (criticism appreciated!)

[TheFirstMatt]

Heeeeere's another one for you. It's good to know what you guys think!

THIS ENDLESS VIOLENCE

Friday night
Fights always start
With me in the middle
It's me in the middle

Against the wall
It's always hard
To me you're a riddle
And to me you're a joke

Think about it
I break about it
Can't live without
Now spare me the breath because you're never gonna come back up

--Chorus--

(You had it coming)
It always felt like something
(You had it coming)
Without your arms open
(You had it coming)
Now you'll never fall in love

(You had it coming)
This endless violence bores me
(You had it coming)
Another late night story
(You had it coming)
Now you'll never fall in love

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Turn down the lights
They hurt my eyes
What am I doing here
What am I doing

You're on the floor
So motionless
To me you look beautiful
And to me you look alive

Think about it
I break about it
Can't live without it
No spare me the breath because you're never gonna come back up

--2nd Chorus--

They took our hearts
But we don't need them


Beuller? Beuller? :)

[Bflat_band_geek]

i think its really good:-)

[TheFirstMatt]

thanks!

for those that couldn't figure it out, this song isnt me being all emo etc. It a song about domestic violence written in the first person. The character is meant to come across whereby you can't tell whether he is remorseful or not, but he felt like he did what had to be done.