Alright

[TheFallenScene]

I don't hate you for it man, I like the fact you are helping me out. But in the first verse, like what needs help what does not look right?

[TheFallenScene]

That reply should have been connected to "One Simple Dream" and by the way it is directed towards Buried Alive.

[BuriedAlive]

The energy is almost drained
Everyday I feel less alive
With my voice dry trying to carry on
With my soul escaping as I hold on
I know I could drag this out for one more day
But maybe it will just be memories of a few people
Instead of the millions hoped for

if the quoting didnt work then who cares. but i think you should work on that part i dont think it comes together. i think that part needs work. try to shorten some of it. make it a tad more meaningful or so other people can catch the meaning more.