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cortney
07/14/03, 09:56 AM
misguided
verse1
i always recognized your smile
and now i know what im missing
it seems as if your so far
but yor only a phone call away
but i can never reach you
because im scared to dial your number
and things will never change
i just wanna hold you and ease the pain

chorus
your from that lonely shiny star
that has been misguided by choices
and you will never become mine
and ill never hide the voices
i just wanna stay stuck in this moment
where i look at your picture all night

verse2
everyone and everyday is passing
and that includes you
and it doesnt amke any difference
that im always getting hurt
but i will always hold onto that hope
that someday we'll be together
and then maybe ill learn to cope
until the end of this forever

verse3
im always hoping for that one chance
where i get to prove myself
and then maybe it will show you
that my feelings are real
and that id never hurt you
and that id never leave you
and ill savour that one moment
and never let it go.

wewin
07/15/03, 08:05 AM
you're a fucking poseur.

"ooh, let's write a song about girls! No one's ever done THAT before!"

"ooh, let's write a song about being a loser who can't get the girl! No one's ever done THAT before!"

kinda punky n stuff? This is what punk was created to fight against, you fuck. Go listen to Simple Plan and stop writing songs until you can think for yourself and write something interesting.

punkqb
07/15/03, 05:38 PM
Originally posted by wewin
you're a fucking poseur.

"ooh, let's write a song about girls! No one's ever done THAT before!"

"ooh, let's write a song about being a loser who can't get the girl! No one's ever done THAT before!"

kinda punky n stuff? This is what punk was created to fight against, you fuck. Go listen to Simple Plan and stop writing songs until you can think for yourself and write something interesting.

he's got a point

wadejunkie
07/15/03, 06:51 PM
cortney is a girls name

Rufio217
07/16/03, 03:48 PM
WEWIN don't be a fucking dueche bag, and tell the kid he is a poseur, it's not nice, just tell the kid he sucks at writing that is enough though you don't need to add on...And don't state you know what punk was created for, you weren't even around then...

TheFallenScene
07/16/03, 04:23 PM
Guys, shut the hell up! Give her another chance, help her out! Don't bash on her.