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nickyano
01/16/07, 06:18 PM
A train that we forgot
Is still on the tracks.
The vessel unused,
Succumbs to rust.

I sit in a cab
And pretend to be going
Somewhere.
The cobwebs
Sway, and
For the conductor's whistle
I wait.
But the air is tacit.

I look out the window,
And the outside peers in.
Laced with the dust of ennui,
The station sighs
With hope of relief.

And then I realize
That I've been here forever.
In a place that surrounds me.

OveriseFan
01/16/07, 06:46 PM
So I was breaking this down, and was having a hard time following it. I'll be re-reading this tomorrow then going into it.