attn: apoemtothedead

[buysoap]

Since you are the real CEO and webmaster, I was wondering if you could give me a review/critique of this poem I wrote? I know a lot of people think you are just trying to get people mad, but I know you actually read the poems and answer sincerely.

Anyway... here is my poem:

Ambidexturous

Death
Darkness
I see a light
But I'm too
Far
From life
To care
Snow ball
Running in the wind I see the sounds of air
It brings me
Calm
But not for
Long

I am not a flower.

[black rose]

Okay, obviously I'm not him, but my opinion is that it's too choppy and the structure is way off. Sorry. It also seems like it's all been done before.

[dekdog11]

dam man thats really good.
mark is going to be so happy.

[unwritten]

You are a genius.

[OveriseFan]

Thank God this isn't a genuine "Mark sucks" thread...

[RomeoAGoGo]

Mark sucks.

[ArTkY_]

hahahahahaha

<3

[apoemtothedead]

You are a flower. You are beautiful. Never give up.

I'm going to ban RomeoAGoGo again.

[buysoap]

Okay, obviously I'm not him, but my opinion is that it's too choppy and the structure is way off. Sorry. It also seems like it's all been done before.

You just dont get it, or me. Go back to school and learn what poetry really is, you phony.

[black rose]

You just dont get it, or me. Go back to school and learn what poetry really is, you phony.Look, if I did understand it, I still wouldn't like it.

[buysoap]

Look, if I did understand it, I still wouldn't like it.

Well you obviously have no taste.

Or talent, for that matter.

[xwisebuddhax]

This is ridiculous, everyone should grow the fuck up. He tried giving you constructive criticsm, what you could've said was thanx, and leave it at that.

[a speedo model]

Okay, so alot of people didn't realize this was a joke...

[vandalsandquinn]

Okay, so alot of people didn't realize this was a joke...
haha obviously

[RomeoAGoGo]

Jokes are meant to be funny.

This is just stupid.

[buysoap]

Jokes are meant to be funny.

This is just stupid.

You would know. You are the stupid expert.

[vandalsandquinn]

You would know. You are the stupid expert.
oooh

[black rose]

Jokes are meant to be funny.

This is just stupid.Exactly.

[vandalsandquinn]

if you guys get bothered so much by mark just put him on ignore instead of complaining. or take his jokes

[RomeoAGoGo]

You would know. You are the stupid expert.

Haha. Toolbag.

[black rose]

if you guys get bothered so much by mark just put him on ignore instead of complaining. or take his jokesWhat he says to me isn't a joke.

[Adeniz19]

Jokes are meant to be funny.

This is just stupid.i guess you never heard of an inside joke.

[Adeniz19]

if you guys get bothered so much by mark just put him on ignore instead of complaining. or take his jokesor don't come in a thread that is directed towards him haha.

[vandalsandquinn]

What he says to me isn't a joke.
so put him on ignore
or don't come in a thread that is directed towards him haha.
haha obviously

[ArTkY_]

You guys are fucking stupid.

Mark is funny. Funny is Mark. Move on.

[RomeoAGoGo]

i guess you never heard of an inside joke.

Nope, never.

[RomeoAGoGo]

if you guys get bothered so much by mark just put him on ignore instead of complaining. or take his jokes

Or he can stop posting here.

[black rose]

Or he can stop posting here.I'm with you Romeo.

[vandalsandquinn]

You guys are fucking stupid.

Mark is funny. Funny is Mark. Move on.
exactly

Or he can stop posting here.
or you could stop being bothered by him and realize he is kidding. you giving him a reaction only makes him happier

[ArTkY_]

hahaha, Mark has been messing around in this forum before most of you started posting.

[Flags of Dawn]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a183/schwaly3/Picture1.gif

[RomeoAGoGo]

or you could stop being bothered by him and realize he is kidding. you giving him a reaction only makes him happier


That's pretty pathetic.

I think this whole thing is stupid because new posters that come here to recieve critique on their work usually don't know he's kidding. It discourages them from continuing to post here, which in turn kills the helpful vibe a feedback forum was intended for.

I don't see the point of making idiotic posts which offer no advice and are usually lame put-downs. If any other random noob came on here and was doing this shit you'd all be bitching at them like there's no tomorrow. Instead, you people feel the need to actually defend this moron because of e-friendship.

That's the only real joke here.

[ArTkY_]

I'm not defending him, I'm just watching him piss you off. And its quite hilarious.

[vandalsandquinn]

That's pretty pathetic.

I think this whole thing is stupid because new posters that come here to recieve critique on their work usually don't know he's kidding. It discourages them from continuing to post here, which in turn kills the helpful vibe a feedback forum was intended for.

I don't see the point of making idiotic posts which offer no advice and are usually lame put-downs. If any other random noob came on here and was doing this shit you'd all be bitching at them like there's no tomorrow. Instead, you people feel the need to actually defend this moron because of e-friendship.

That's the only real joke here.i don't even think mark likes me. i understand what you mean about the new posters, and i don't know what you can do about it. complaining about it isn't going to make him stop, i don't know what will but there is nothing you can do

[Flags of Dawn]

I don't see the point of making idiotic posts which offer no advice and are usually lame put-downs.

like your posts against him? yeah me neither.

[Harold Wood]

stupid

/thread

[RomeoAGoGo]

like your posts against him? yeah me neither.

I don't go into every single thread and say "oh god this shit sucks, never come here again, blah blah blah".


But thanks for playing.

[Flags of Dawn]

I don't go into every single thread and say "oh god this shit sucks, never come here again, blah blah blah".


But thanks for playing.
but you do go into threads directed at him and say "mark sucks, he's pathetic, never post here again blah blah blah"

and you're welcome.

[RomeoAGoGo]

i don't even think mark likes me. i understand what you mean about the new posters, and i don't know what you can do about it. complaining about it isn't going to make him stop, i don't know what will but there is nothing you can do

There's nothing I can do? What the fuck?

Dude is a dooshbag to the 10th power and a half.

He just needs to stop.

[OveriseFan]

Mark doesn't like us, but we do defend him. Well, "defend" isn't really the right word, but you know what I mean.

You don't get it, just like this thread. If you want a true poetry forum, there are plenty. We help people here, but if they get discouraged by Mark, they probably shouldn't be writing anyhow.

Mark has ripped everyone on here apart.

I like Mark, I don't know if he likes me. I don't really care.

You can't get rid of him. If the Lyrics forum is Hogwarts, he's "Peeves".

[vandalsandquinn]

There's nothing I can do? What the fuck?

Dude is a dooshbag to the 10th power and a half.

He just needs to stop.
and what is this doing to help?
Mark doesn't like us, but we do defend him. Well, "defend" isn't really the right word, but you know what I mean.

You don't get it, just like this thread. If you want a true poetry forum, there are plenty. We help people here, but if they get discouraged by Mark, they probably shouldn't be writing anyhow.

Mark has ripped everyone on here apart.

I like Mark, I don't know if he likes me. I don't really care.

You can't get rid of him. If the Lyrics forum is Hogwarts, he's "Peeves".
haha nice analogy, but yes i agree with that

[Harold Wood]

I don't go into every single thread and say "oh god this shit sucks, never come here again, blah blah blah".


But thanks for playing.

but the point is people respond to them in a manner that makes it enjoyable for him

so he will continue to do it for the end of his days

it's no big deal at all....... I laugh sometimes

[RomeoAGoGo]

but you do go into threads directed at him and say "mark sucks, he's pathetic, never post here again blah blah blah"

and you're welcome.

Not really. This is the only thread I came into and went out of my way to start shit.

I'm sorry, you're still wrong.

[OveriseFan]

Romeo, just stop.

You're arguing an argument you can't win. Maybe you're right. Maybe you're not, but it DOESNT MATTER! So just stop the bashing of Mark, and quit making a big deal about it.

I'm not being a dick, I'm helping you out.

Just ignore him.

[Flags of Dawn]

Not really. This is the only thread I came into and went out of my way to start shit.

I'm sorry, you're still wrong.
oh right, you just made an entire thread about it to voice your overreactions...my bad.

[RomeoAGoGo]

Mark doesn't like us, but we do defend him. Well, "defend" isn't really the right word, but you know what I mean.

You don't get it, just like this thread. If you want a true poetry forum, there are plenty. We help people here, but if they get discouraged by Mark, they probably shouldn't be writing anyhow.

Mark has ripped everyone on here apart.

I like Mark, I don't know if he likes me. I don't really care.

You can't get rid of him. If the Lyrics forum is Hogwarts, he's "Peeves".

So because there are a ton of other poetry forums justifies him acting like a retard? Hm.

[OveriseFan]

haha nice analogy, but yes i agree with that

I thought so.

Harry Potter puts it all in perspective.

[Harold Wood]

Mark doesn't like us, but we do defend him. Well, "defend" isn't really the right word, but you know what I mean.

You don't get it, just like this thread. If you want a true poetry forum, there are plenty. We help people here, but if they get discouraged by Mark, they probably shouldn't be writing anyhow.

Mark has ripped everyone on here apart.

I like Mark, I don't know if he likes me. I don't really care.

You can't get rid of him. If the Lyrics forum is Hogwarts, he's "Peeves".

agreed

I could care less whether or not someone likes me on here

it's just silly

[Flags of Dawn]

http://www.del.elixant.net/gtfo/internet%20serious.jpg

[vandalsandquinn]

I thought so.

Harry Potter puts it all in perspective.
The world according to harry potter. it all makes sense now
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a183/schwaly3/Picture1.gif
hahaha

[RomeoAGoGo]

oh right, you just made an entire thread about it to voice your overreactions...my bad.


Overreactions?

I made one thread that basically spoke for a lot of other people who don't appreciate his idiotic little routine.

[Flags of Dawn]

The world according to harry potter. it all makes sense now

hahaha
haha, that wasnt even the one i meant to post.

[Flags of Dawn]

Overreactions?

I made one thread that basically spoke for a lot of other people who don't appreciate his idiotic little routine.
its the internet, calm down.

[vandalsandquinn]

haha, that wasnt even the one i meant to post.
now everyone can see your mistake haha

[RomeoAGoGo]

Romeo, just stop.

You're arguing an argument you can't win. Maybe you're right. Maybe you're not, but it DOESNT MATTER! So just stop the bashing of Mark, and quit making a big deal about it.

I'm not being a dick, I'm helping you out.

Just ignore him.

I know you're not being a dick.

And I know I'm right.

Some of you really need to jump off his nuts.

Oh and the internet is serious business shit is overplayed.

A little originality can go a long way.

[Flags of Dawn]

now everyone can see your mistake haha
haha, thanks for that.

[Flags of Dawn]

I know you're not being a dick.

And I know I'm right.

Some of you really need to jump off his nuts.

Oh and the internet is serious business shit is overplayed.

A little originality can go a long way.
but still effective.

[RomeoAGoGo]

but still effective.

Not so much. But to each his own.

[RomeoAGoGo]

Side note : It's hilarious how five of you just jumped in here all at once to voice your opinion on this matter (you're all basically saying the same thing : it's a joke lololoz get it?!? calm down brah itz the internets no1s serious hurrr)

[sweet tragedy]

Yeah, people defending someone. Hahahahahaa. Best joke I've heard in ages.

[thatwasamoment]

Side note : It's hilarious how five of you just jumped in here all at once to voice your opinion on this matter (you're all basically saying the same thing : it's a joke lololoz get it?!? calm down brah itz the internets no1s serious hurrr)this guy is funny.

[apoemtothedead]

Here's the funniest part of all Mr. AGoGo, you know exactly what I'm doing, why I'm doing it, etc. And you're still feeding to it.

[OveriseFan]

Side note : It's hilarious how five of you just jumped in here all at once to voice your opinion on this matter (you're all basically saying the same thing : it's a joke lololoz get it?!? calm down brah itz the internets no1s serious hurrr)

That's not funny...

[OveriseFan]

Here's the funniest part of all Mr. AGoGo, you know exactly what I'm doing, why I'm doing it, etc. And you're still feeding to it.

haha. The "Mr. AGoGo" comment made me laugh.

[Adeniz19]

back on topic: this poem is beautiful. i felt it deep inside me

[OveriseFan]

back on topic: this poem is beautiful. i felt it deep inside me

The "I am not a flower" line really speaks to me...

It's like it's written for me.

[pearljamontoast]

That's pretty pathetic.

I think this whole thing is stupid because new posters that come here to recieve critique on their work usually don't know he's kidding. It discourages them from continuing to post here, which in turn kills the helpful vibe a feedback forum was intended for.

I don't see the point of making idiotic posts which offer no advice and are usually lame put-downs. If any other random noob came on here and was doing this shit you'd all be bitching at them like there's no tomorrow. Instead, you people feel the need to actually defend this moron because of e-friendship.

That's the only real joke here.

Talking about apoemfromthedead, right? I'm pretty new here, I've been on the recieving end of his words, but it was alright. Any newbie with half a brain can see that what he says is just trying to aggravate you and be funny. I don't find him offensive even though his nickname for me is "dykecunt". Because I know he's just messing about.

[buysoap]

Here's the funniest part of all Mr. AGoGo, you know exactly what I'm doing, why I'm doing it, etc. And you're still feeding to it.


Mr. AGoGo is just not ready to understand that his poetry and lyrics really do suck.

[strobelife]

You guys are fun people.

[Flags of Dawn]

You guys are fun people.
swt username.

[strobelife]

swt username.

Thank you.

[lfdfforever]

hehehehe

[Tristan Needler]

Since you are the real CEO and webmaster, I was wondering if you could give me a review/critique of this poem I wrote? I know a lot of people think you are just trying to get people mad, but I know you actually read the poems and answer sincerely.

Anyway... here is my poem:

Ambidexturous

Death
Darkness
I see a light
But I'm too
Far
From life
To care
Snow ball
Running in the wind I see the sounds of air
It brings me
Calm
But not for
Long

I am not a flower.
Sounds like it was written by William Shatner.

[RomeoAGoGo]

Mr. AGoGo is just not ready to understand that his poetry and lyrics really do suck.


My poems > your bands lyrics

x10 to the 87th power.

Kid tested, mother approved.

[OveriseFan]

My poems > your bands lyrics

x10 to the 87th power.

Kid tested, mother approved.

I don't think Matt has a band...

But it's good to see you're not conceited or anything...

[ArTkY_]

hahaha, I still can't believe Mark said Mr. AGoGo because that was hilarious.

[RomeoAGoGo]

I don't think Matt has a band...

But it's good to see you're not conceited or anything...

Unless I'm totally wrong (in which case I apologize) what is this?

http://www.freewebs.com/a06rock/mainsource.htm

[buysoap]

Unless I'm totally wrong (in which case I apologize) what is this?

http://www.freewebs.com/a06rock/mainsource.htm


Hahahaha, that's not my band

And for the record, while those lyrics may suck, I'm completely aware they suck, as they were written almost four years ago, and have been re-written.

Your poems, which you are writing now, just suck.

[apoemtothedead]

He got banned again?

[lfdfforever]

this is a very beautiful poem

[sweet tragedy]

He got banned again?

Anti-semanticness

[a speedo model]

hahaha

[strobelife]

I agree with shiteater. It does sound like it was written by William Shatner. It wasnt the best thing I've ever read, but I have read a lot worse. Keep it up dude.