Broken Mirror/Hope Flys

[xXJaredsGirlXx]

Hey guys. I'm Izzy. And these are a couple of my lyrics/poems. I just want opinions, good or bad.
Thanks


Broken Mirror



Is there something between us?
A reflection of someone other then myself,
A different personality hid beneath me,
Taking control every once in a while,
When I have no command.


Why are you here?
Just leave me alone,
I can deal with this myself,
I don’t wanna go back in the dark,
But you leave me no choice.

(Chorus)
Shattered to pieces,
A broken mirror falls down,
My faded kisses,
Lie dead on the ground.

There’s no right,
And no wrong,
Just whatever we decide,
Might as well be gone,
I would make no difference.

I’m tired of seeing you cry in front of me,
You need to be strong,
Wipe those tears away,
And walk out in to the sunny day,
Right inside of me

(Chorus x2)






Hope Flys


Hope fly’s on wings of despair,

Feathers fall out like sins,
Winds where temptation has been,
Karma is never quite fair.

Promises are never kept,
They’re always broken,
Lies are in debt,
And we’re already dying.

Death is feared,
Natural beauty is over looked,
Disease is never cured,
People complain and say their life is fucked.

Fantasy’s aren’t what they seem,
There’s never gonna be any happy ending.

[apoemtothedead]

Use bigger fonts so other people can read them.

[xXJaredsGirlXx]

Use bigger fonts so other people can read them.


Well, sorry. I'm still trying to figure it out. This is my first time on this forum

[apoemtothedead]

Well, sorry. I'm still trying to figure it out. This is my first time on this forum
You haven't figured it out by 120 posts? Quit already.

[xXJaredsGirlXx]

You haven't figured it out by 120 posts? Quit already.

Haha. Its cause it was in my computer on Word. So I copyed and pasted it on here... Next time I'll remember to type it instead.

[lostfear]

you know you can just make the word font bigger than paste it. right...?