Another Chance Gone By

[TheFallenScene]

Takes a time-out from a few of my "darker" lyrics that I write and shows you a song about this girl I know. Commentary would be great and I know there are flaws in the song. Is planning on fixing it. Enjoy.

Another Chance Gone By

I thought I saw you vaguely in the sky
Your face twisted together in a cloud
Guess I was wrong, torn myself back away
Again, unclear by your constant sunlight shine
I couldn’t see pass the intensity of your eyes

(Chorus)
Another chance gone by
The dew buds in the grass
Shimmer like the tears in your eyes
Avoiding you I apologize

Hearing the whistle of the wind
Brings your glories voice back to mind
Was that your face in the bloom of the flower?
The pollen brings back memories
The sweet aroma of your beauty

(Chorus)
Another chance gone by
The dew buds in the grass
Shimmer like the tears in your eyes
Avoiding you I apologize

Remembering the first time we met
Brought a feeling of comfort
Knowing you were there next to my side
Was the greatest sensation ever
Like the ocean, you will always sustain your excellence
Was that your face in the sand?

(Chorus) (x2)
Another chance gone by
The dew buds in the grass
Shimmer like the tears in your eyes
Avoiding you I apologize

[Rufio217]

Nope dude, i raed the first line and didn't like it, so i didn't read teh rest, because I can't stand hearing about the SKY anymore it is an overused topic....sorry bro...

[TheFallenScene]

Come one man, I normally don't write lyrics like that. And the first verse only says something partial to the sky.

[TheFallenScene]

Come on man**

[TheFallenScene]

Commentary please guys. Most of my songs people say are "dark" and words like that. But I was just wondering how some sort of mushy song would work out when I write it. Thanks.

[Rufio217]

lol, it doesn't seem like a mushy song, it actually seems like a description of a setting rather than a song, As for teh title, how does it connect, dew buds, adn horizons relate to a chance gone by?, i'm nto getting it, I'm just not into it, but don't worry writing happy songs are often times hard t do...it just taks pracatice