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jeremyfromva
01/26/07, 07:36 PM
Seems like yesterday
I was a different person
Clothed in my mistakes
I was hiding from the truth
I didn't want to see
The mask that I created
The stories that I told
All started to quickly unfold

You exposed me
Now I'm free from my shame
You exposed me
And I praise Your Holy name
You brought me from the darkness
and made me see the light
Since you exposed me
I can reach greater heights

Hiding in the shadows
I see got me nowhere in this life
Was always in a struggle
Fighting someone else's fight
But then You came along
And removed the blinders from my eyes
You came along and now I realize

matt_rawlings
01/26/07, 07:39 PM
About as predictable and cliche as it gets

CellarGhosts
01/27/07, 01:19 PM
I thought it was pretty good. The whole "you exposed me..." part kinda turned me off, as I have an incredibly hard time believing in the exsistence of God. To me, religion seems like a big fairy tale. But if you believe it and it's important to you, then good for you. All in all, I liked the rest of it though...I won't tell you its' predictable or cliche, as that's what everyone seems to think of MY lyrics, though no one ever says what ISN'T cliche or predictable...anyway I digress...good job, over all.

0starter0
01/29/07, 08:39 AM
Needs a lot of work in my opinion.

a speedo model
01/29/07, 08:44 AM
Yeah.