Rewind into submission

[raabhimself]

we are doomed....
we were doomed from the start
i wanted you to be mine
i never wanted us to part

but we were doomed
and i can't escape
girls can't rewind
girls can't relate

but i fell, and i'm broken
can't sleep, can't think right
i tripped but i'm alright
so insecure in this light

but i thought you were the one
but now i'm unsure
you give me nothing to go
you give me nothing
but i thought you were the one
but now i'm unsure
you give me nothing to go
you give me nothing

we were doomed...
we were doomed at the bar
i tried to lead you home
you passed out in my car

but we were doomed
i can't get back
your problems
become my....

but i fell, and i'm broken
can't sleep, can't think right
i tripped but i'm alright
so insecure in this light

but i thought you were the one
but now i'm unsure
you give me nothing to go
you give me nothing
but i thought you were the one
but now i'm unsure
you give me nothing to go
you give me nothing
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i don't like it nearly as much as some other stuff i did but eh, i'll live with it.

[Rufio217]

I agree with you to, i don't like it either, 1 because you switch from and rhyming scheme to a non-rhyming scheme, 2 almost ever verse doesn't connect, you haev a problem in all your songs of ahving ok lines herr and there BUT NONE OF THEM CONNECT, work on that then try again........