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utgjames
01/29/07, 03:10 AM
This is something i worked on for awhile, its a song about the 2.5yr. relationship
to hear the music version check out my solo stuff, but message me for the link [im not gonna put it out there for those vultures that get off by posting derogtory things]

9 months
have passed and these words
still linger on the tip of my tongue
waiting for their chance to escape these lips
out into the air then deep down into your cerebellum
hey did you hear what that boy is sellin
random lines meant to knock you off of your feet
so send this on a ship with a destination
for the bottom of the ocean
right next to my heart that matches the
motion of your feet as you walked away from us
and if you get a chance to look behind you
at the fork in the road
the boy standing all alone
thats me
wishing i had never made you choose [because]


winters comin on soon
but you're not here to
keep me warm
as the snow falls
they say that these things always work out for the best
but i must confess
i know
this is no fairytale


alright
lets back up to when i messed up
do you remember that cold day late last november
when you said
"i won't be home for christmas this year"
and i said, "no please, please no, please dont go away"
you said, "babe i'll be okay,
and one day you will be too,
after you find a new girl to swoon"
but what if thats not what i want
no i'll just lay here under the weight of my regret
like a blanket
as this snow falls and the decemeber air is killing me

winters comin on soon
but you're not here to
keep me warm
as the snow falls
they say that these things always work out for the best
but i must confess
i know
this is no fairytale


i know that i was the one who made
you have to go away
but i would bite my tongue ten thousand times
to take it all back on that night
i gave in to the demon in white
she had eyes that burned me to my core
i would never have tasted that poison
if i could go back
but i'm better now and i see you found
a new boy to hold on to

winters comin on soon
but you're not here to
keep me warm
as the snow falls
they say that these things always work out for the best
but i must confess
i know
this is no fairytale

xwisebuddhax
01/29/07, 05:01 AM
I like it, PM me the link... I'm interested to hear it mainly because the rhyming is a bit awkward, I want to see how you pull it off.

mizoka
01/29/07, 11:53 AM
you're good, man. i just think you should work a little on your voice...but it isnt a big deal to me


I like it, PM me the link... I'm interested to hear it mainly because the rhyming is a bit awkward, I want to see how you pull it off.

yea, the rhyming deff is a bit awkward...