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xAlexisonfirex
07/17/03, 08:37 PM
your best traits are you cold eyes, cold heart, and cold blood/
dont curse my heart because it bleeds your name. curse my mind for thinking of you, and curse your soul for being so cold. curse these late nights and how i can't fall asleep without dreaming of you. curse these morning i wake up alone. and curse your stone cold eyes and curse every time...everytime you ever said hi now let me pray, that when life moves on, I never look back, i never look back on the days that were so wrongly spent...any night where i stayed up just to think of you, was something that i regret i try not to drink, but tonight, i need something to help me forget you, help me get you out of my mind....everytime i close my eyes, all i can see is you smiling as you set a fire underneath my heart and i take back everytime i ever said sorry, amd i take back everytime i ever screamed your fucking name as I layed in bed....only to fall asleep and dream of you again but this song doesn't mean much, since you don't give a fuck, come to see me sometime and this is all you wil hear...i'm sorry, not fo rupsetting you, sorry that you were born so beautiful but with a wretched heart

Rufio217
07/18/03, 05:58 AM
Overuse of teh wrod curse in this song, the starting line isn't really catchy or drawing people into the song, nor does it seem to make sense, it is simple and plan, yet i see where a sound of a band with equal screamign singing personalities could work with teh song...

xAlexisonfirex
07/18/03, 08:14 AM
i meant to use curse that much in the song. that was the point.

we did turn this into a good song, but its two singers, no screaming...well, not yet.