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xAlexisonfirex
07/17/03, 08:39 PM
dear lover or former...that would fit this situation better. because as you read this i am dying. every word that scans your eyes is another opened vein. but it's ok, because i'll stay out of your way.
i just wanted you to know exactly what you've meant to me. you were my whole life. and you left. now my life is gone. and as i lay here slowly gasping for a breath of air that isn't accompanied by my blood I remember our last kiss. i remember your voice. i remember your touch, and your face. i remember the way you walked out of my house for the last time, even in a heartbreaking moment you were the most beautiful thing i've ever seen. will you remember me? i sure hope you will. i sure hope this makes as big of an impact on your life as you did too mine. you made my life beautiful. it's just too bad it has to end so ugly.
happy valentines day.
Rufio217
07/18/03, 06:01 AM
every word that scans your eyes is another opened vein......That DOESN"T make sense, you can tell you forced it......gasping for a breath of air that isn't accompanied by my blood....If there is no blood your choking on then when do you mention the fact there your not breathing blood, you say it as though it is a different from teh norm, but last i checked people don't normally breathe blood.............I'm sorry bro but this sin't a song, it's a dead poetic tragedy attempt at a song, that turned out to be anotehr failed lover letter....sorry
xAlexisonfirex
07/18/03, 08:09 AM
every word that scans your eyes is another opened vein: its saying that as she reads the letter i am killing myself (:another opened vein:)
the choking on blood. if you cut your own throat you will be choking on your own blood right?
sorry if this wasnt exactly straightforward if igured the readers especially musiclovers to be able to realize some of this.
wadejunkie
07/18/03, 10:23 AM
the eye scans the word, the word doesnt scan the eye
Rufio217
07/18/03, 12:28 PM
Dude, if you slit your throat yes you would be berathign blood but you said...........air that ISN'T accompanied by blood, meanign that there is NO blood, so it still doesn't make sense
xAlexisonfirex
07/18/03, 01:24 PM
damn you guys are no help.
do you want me to pick out every little hting that has nothing to do with the song wrong with your shit rufio?
HE SLIT HIS THROAT SO HE IS CHOLING ON HIS BLOOD.
EVERYTIME HE BREATHES IN HE CHOKES ON HIS BLOOD MORE, HE IS TRYING TO BREATH IN WITHOUT CHOKING ON HIS BLOOD.
elementary fuckhead.
and wade, thank you for that piece of information, god.
and every word you scan with your eyes is another oepened vein.
there ya go, edited and changed just for you.
Originally posted by xAlexisonfirex
every word that scans your eyes is another opened vein: its saying that as she reads the letter i am killing myself (:another opened vein:)
maybe it would make more sense if it said "ever word that my eyes scan (or read, for that matter) is another opened vein."
other than that, i liked it.
wadejunkie
07/18/03, 01:47 PM
Originally posted by xAlexisonfirex
damn you guys are no help.
do you want me to pick out every little hting that has nothing to do with the song wrong with your shit rufio?
HE SLIT HIS THROAT SO HE IS CHOLING ON HIS BLOOD.
EVERYTIME HE BREATHES IN HE CHOKES ON HIS BLOOD MORE, HE IS TRYING TO BREATH IN WITHOUT CHOKING ON HIS BLOOD.
elementary fuckhead.
and wade, thank you for that piece of information, god.
and every word you scan with your eyes is another oepened vein.
there ya go, edited and changed just for you.
calm down, man
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