wow, im posting another song

[MaybeOneDay]

so you all know about the girl i met this past week....and the song i wrote about her. well, i just searched through some of my older lyrics on my computer and found this song. and its scary because it fits perfect with what im feeling right now and the whole situation with this girl. so read it if ya want, and feedback would be cool to see as well.



"Always And Forever"

Verse 1
She's gone
Wait up
For how long
Only time can tell
I know
That she
Is gone
But only not for long
And I
Know that
That she isn't gone for long

Pre-Chorus
So I
Wake up
And She's the first that comes to mind
And you
No clue
Of the thing's you do to me

Chorus
Always and forever
I will remember
Never can forget
The week we spent together
Always and forever
I will remember
Never can forget her
A week we spent together

Verse 2
And now
It's been
Two days
And how long can I wait
For now
I'll live
With her
Running through my mind
But I
Just want
To know
That she'll come back some day
And I
Know that
I won't let this one get away

Pre-Chorus
So I
Wake up
And she's the first that's on my mind
And you
Don't know
The way I feel now right about you

Chorus
Always and forever
I will remember
Never can forget
The week we spent together
Always and forever
I will remember
Never can forget her
A week we spent together

Bridge
She's got the motion
I need the potion
Only for her
Would I swim across the ocean
She's got the good life
I've got the long try
I would do anything
To have her back by my side

Chorus
Always and forever
I will remember
Never can forget
The Week we spent together
Always and forever
I will remember
Never can forget her
A week we spent together
She's got the motion
I need the potion
Only for her
Would I swim across the ocean

[angie710]

Funny, Im the last to know...

[Patrick]

is that copywrited

[theused_FSF]

copywritten

[Jim Morgan]

Brandon thats really good man

check out the your lyrics section, and lemme know what you think of my stuff

[Zack Attack]

isnt this why there is a lyrics forum.

[Greg]

Originally posted by swingswing
isnt this why there is a lyrics forum.

look who cares.... oh wait... NO ONE.... besides brandon is an admin. he can do whatever he wants.

[angie710]

Originally posted by Greg
look who cares.... oh wait... NO ONE.... besides brandon is an admin. he can do whatever he wants.



:D :D - MmmmmHmmmm...

[Alex Djaferis]

Originally posted by Greg
look who cares.... oh wait... NO ONE.... besides brandon is an admin. he can do whatever he wants.

ooo the power.

[punked78]

Originally posted by Greg
look who cares.... oh wait... NO ONE.... besides brandon is an admin. he can do whatever he wants.

i wish i could do whatever i want

[Zack Attack]

but last time i checked thats why theres a lyrcs forum.

[Clarett'sGreyGoose]

Originally posted by swingswing
but last time i checked thats why theres a lyrcs forum.

it doesnt matter. Brandon's an admin, and highly respected. no one gives a fuck what he does.

[NOFXdesendents5]

Originally posted by PlaysWithFire
it doesnt matter. Brandon's an admin, and highly respected. no one gives a fuck what he does.

Damn straight.

And that song would take like 15 minutes to sing I think.

[Zack Attack]

hey guys, just loosen the grip.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by NOFXdesendents5
Damn straight.

And that song would take like 15 minutes to sing I think.

3:49

I timed it earlier this morning, while playing the music for it.


And Jim, i checked out your lyrics you posted in there. I really liked what i read man, good stuff. Keep at it, I'd love to read more of them.

[MaybeOneDay]

but you're right, i should have posted this in the lyrics forum. and i'll do that next time. thanks to anyone who liked the song. and about the "me being able to do anything i want" bit, that is true. but im not going to do that. I could do whatever i want. but i won't. I don't want to be any different from the rest of you's

[angie710]

Ahem...Brandon....What the fuck?

[Zack Attack]

Originally posted by MaybeOneDay
but you're right, i should have posted this in the lyrics forum. and i'll do that next time. thanks to anyone who liked the song. and about the "me being able to do anything i want" bit, that is true. but im not going to do that. I could do whatever i want. but i won't. I don't want to be any different from the rest of you's


thank you.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by angie710
Ahem...Brandon....What the fuck?

What's wrong ?

[NOFXdesendents5]

Originally posted by MaybeOneDay
3:49

I timed it earlier this morning, while playing the music for it.


And Jim, i checked out your lyrics you posted in there. I really liked what i read man, good stuff. Keep at it, I'd love to read more of them.

3:49? Nobody will listen that long! Just play really fast and scream the lyrics and you'll have a hit under 2:30.

Plus you'll be excepted by both emo and punks.

[kevin]

Accepeted*

Dumbass

[angie710]

Originally posted by MaybeOneDay
What's wrong ?


Just waiting for you to email me back............

[Clarett'sGreyGoose]

3:49 is pretty long. but some of the greatest songs ever are longer than 2:30.
like:
NOFX:
The Decline - 18:21
The Separation of Church and Skate - 3:09

Led Zeppelin:
Kashmir - 8:32
Stairway To Heaven...who knows.

Alk3:
Radio - 4:40

Senses Fail - 187 - one of the greatest pissed off to the max songs ever is like 4 something.

I used my winamp playlist to find these lengths. i'm not a loser to the extent of having song lengths memorized.

[NOFXdesendents5]

Originally posted by PlaysWithFire
3:49 is pretty long. but some of the greatest songs ever are longer than 2:30.
like:
NOFX:
The Decline - 18:21


Yeah but that song kicks ass. And DOA made that song with Jello Biafra thats 12 minutes I think but they are awesome topics.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by NOFXdesendents5
3:49? Nobody will listen that long! Just play really fast and scream the lyrics and you'll have a hit under 2:30.

Plus you'll be excepted by both emo and punks.

lol 3:49 isn't even a long song man

[Clarett'sGreyGoose]

Originally posted by MaybeOneDay
lol 3:49 isn't even a long song man

what are you talking about man? PUNK RAWwWWKkKkK involves simple 3-chord progression and songs 3:00 or shorter. get with the program!!!


\m/ I'M SO PUNK!!! \m/

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[NOFXdesendents5]

Originally posted by MaybeOneDay
lol 3:49 isn't even a long song man


I lose interest if its over 3:00....

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by NOFXdesendents5
I lose interest if its over 3:00....

no offense but that's kinda sad dude

[the_champ_is_here]

Originally posted by PlaysWithFire
it doesnt matter. Brandon's an admin, and highly respected. no one gives a fuck what he does.

I don't respect him. And as an admin, he should set an example of what's right to do. If anyone else posted this, the thread would have already been moved.

[Greg]

konstantine by something corporate is 8 minutes logn isnt it? and i think they want to make it 11minutes 11 seconds... i dunno but i like it

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by OffBasil
I don't respect him. And as an admin, he should set an example of what's right to do. If anyone else posted this, the thread would have already been moved.

im cool with the fact that you have something against me, it doesn't matter to me. im glad you don't respect me.

im sorry if im not up to your standards, anyways, yeah if it will make you happy ill move this thread. to its proper home.

[NOFXdesendents5]

Originally posted by Greg
konstantine by something corporate is 8 minutes logn isnt it? and i think they want to make it 11minutes 11 seconds... i dunno but i like it

Something Corparate sucks though dude

[sigh]

i dont think i can judge a song just by the lyrics, if i hear it ill decide

[wadejunkie]

Originally posted by NOFXdesendents5
Something Corparate sucks though dude

konstantine is awesome, you mark summers

[xAlexisonfirex]

Originally posted by sigh
i dont think i can judge a song just by the lyrics, if i hear it ill decide

i almost only judge songs by the lyrics, lol.

i love all music as a whole, but as a writer and not a guitarist i am interested in the lyrics rather then the riffs.