'Till Death Do Us Part

[Rufio217]

Average relationship bottoming out the girl moving on you staying stuck, then settling down and hating her for it all, with a "killer" twist...ha ha


Look how beautiful she is
Is all you seem to hear
Well this is the last time you'll be waiting
On someone who really cares

Falling down the spiral staircase
A bag full of memories and moments
And a note that said
'Till death do us part
And this time only one of us is leaving

I can't help but wonder
What sh's thinking when she smil
Th inconsitent stare
Tells me the feelings gone
And so am I

I'll just keep recycling these old ides
In desperassion for acceptance
Tell me does this one suit you
Or is this the end of me?

This ring
Is just a symbol of your memory now
everythign you used to be
No longer a meaning of honor truth and love
Just a rusty memory
Of the days when I felt so alive

You said this was forever
But it's been forever and a day
And that's forever to long
I guess this is what they meant by
'Till death do us part
And I'm the only one leaving this time

[Rufio217]

sorry about the spelling I was in a hurry typing this and did a shitty job on grammar...

[GREENatarisDAY]

you did a pretty shitty job on the song too, might i add

and you're the one who always tells other people that their songs are shit.....this one was complete shit, sorry if that harsh but hey, its the least that i can say :D

[xAlexisonfirex]

same thing as i said on that other song. it just seemed too generic.

i dont know if this is what you were trying to do but it seemed like you were trying to fit shit around til death do us part.

sometimes you have to forget strcuture and let your heart write.

[Rufio217]

yeah dude, i totally agree it has no structure, but it just kidna came to me when i was bored so i just did a 5 minute write job on it....it could use a lot of work

[xAlexisonfirex]

no what i was sayign is it seems forced into a structure.

i meant it like fuck structure just write, ya know?

[raabhimself]

dude you say may poems don't make sense, how can forever be forever too long dude, its forever theres now end.

[Rufio217]

Originally posted by raabhimself
dude you say may poems don't make sense, how can forever be forever too long dude, its forever theres now end.


Ha Ha Ha dudre, get a grip, stop grabbing for straws, because it makes sense...If you had any sense in you you'd realize that "you said this last forever, but it's been forever and a day, and that's forever too long" means the girl sadi they'd be together forever, but obviously it's over so that's the forever and a day, and forever too long meaning it should have never happened? I shouldn't have to explain this to you, you should be smart enough to get it...